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To better your writing
2014.

Which girl feels more attractive?

Which composition will get higher scores?

万 人 迷 书 写

Tip 1. to better your h

andwriting

书写的重要性 2-7分 良好的书写就是隐形的分数, 是写作的亮 点

Which sentence do you think attracts teachers?

1. A big earthquake happened in Sichuan in 2008.

2. A terrible earthquake hit/struck Sichuan in 2008.
Better wording

Which sentence do you think attracts teachers?
3. Computers are very important in our life. Not all people can use it. 4. Computers play a very important part in our daily life. However, not all people can make use of them.

Better phrases

Tip 2. to change your words and expressions
灵活的选择词汇, 短语优先

Do you thinksentence this paragraph well written? A single patternis 句式单一 How to be a popular student? We should love our class. We should be responsible for our work. We should also help others.
What’s more/ In addition, Firstly/ One the one hand, ....

Secondly…

How to be a popular student? It is important for us to love our class and regard it as our big family. We are supposed to be responsible for our work. It also helps to give a hand to those in need. different sentence patterns & good logic

Tip 3. to change your sentence patterns and develop the passage logically and smoothly

灵活变换句型结构
在整篇文章中,避免重复使用一两个相同句式,每篇作 文中要有一两个漂亮结构,如:强调、倒装、非谓语动词、 定、状语从句等。

正确地使用好连接词,过渡词, 使文章 流畅

Check the sentences.
1.There are many students watch the match. watching / who are watching 2.If you can come , we will very happy . /\
be

3. We must be / protect wild animals. 4. To learn English well is really importent.
important

5. I`d like to give you some advices.
advice

Tip 4. to check and avoid mistakes
写好作文后尽量要检查, 避免一些不该 犯的低级错误.

H o w to better your writing

Tip 1. to better your handwriting Tip 2. to change your words and expressions Tip 3. to change your sentence patterns and develop the passage smoothly Tip 4. to check and avoid mistakes

Eg. 国外某网站举办新一轮的网上讲座活动, 正面向全球中学生征集话题。假设你是新华中学 的学生李华,经常访问该网站。请你用英文给该 网站发送一封电子邮件,向其推荐话题。内容包 括: 自我介绍 审题 check 写信目的 推荐话题:我们应该感恩(thankful). 推荐理由 : 感恩父母 ; 感恩老师 ; 感恩是传统美德 预祝活动成功 注意:1.词数100左右; 2.邮件格式已为你给出; Dear sir,

1 . 确定体裁 form 2. 确定人称 person

审题

3. 确审时态tense
4. 确定要点 required points

Eg. 国外某网站举办新一轮的网上讲座活动,正 面向全球中学生征集话题。假设你是新华中学的 学生李华,经常访问该网站。现请你用英文给该 网站发送一封电子邮件,向其推荐话题。内容包 括: 人称:I 体裁 :写电子邮件 自我介绍 要点 1,2 写信目的 推荐话题:我们应该感恩(thankful) 要点 3 推荐理由: 感恩父母; 感恩老师; 其他 要点4,5,6 预祝活动成功 要点 7 注意:1.词数120左右; 2.邮件格式已为你给出;
主要时态:一般现在时态

A piece of a student’s work(学生作文) Dear sir, I am Li Hua. I am a student. I study in XinHua Middle School. I often look your websit. And from it, I know you are finding topics from students in the world. Now, I writing this letter . I want to give you a topic. Thankful is a good topic. Our fathers and mothers work hardly to feed us. We should thankful to them. Our teachers teach us, make us learn a lot of knowledges. We should thank them. as Chinese people, we should thankful, because it is a good thing from the past. When we had a thankful heart, we can know how beauty our life is. I hope you use my topic. I wish your activity will have an successful end. I’m looking forward to your early reply. yours` LiHua

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1. I am Li Hua. I am a student . I study in XinHua Middle School. I often look visit your websit. website And from it , I know you are looking finding fortopics all over the world. Now, I writing this letter. I want to give you a topic. am 2.Thankfulness Thankful is a good topic. Our fathers and up We should mothers work hardly feed us us. hard to bring be thankful to them. Our teachers teach us and , make us learn a lot of knowledges. knowledge We should thank them. As as Chinese people, we should thankful, because it is a good thing from be the have a thankful heart, we can realize past. When we had howbeautiful beauty our life is. 3. I hope you can use my topic. I wish the activity will have an a successful end.

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Improve sentences in para .1 1. I am Li Hua. I am a student. I study in XinHua Middle School. I am Li hua, a student from Xin Hua Middle school. 2. I often visit your website. And from it, I know you are looking for topics from students all over the world. (定语从句 where)

I often visit your website, where I got the news that you’re looking for topics from students all over the world.

Improve sentences in para. 2 & 3 1. Our fathers and mothers work hard to raise us. We should be thankful to them. ( 强调句 It is …that…) 2.Our teachers teach us how to study, and make us learn a lot of knowledge . We should thank them. (We should thank our teachers for…) 3. When we have a thankful heart, we can realize how beautiful life is. (倒装句 Only with…) 4. I hope you can use my topic. I wish the activity will have an successful end.
(I`d appreciate it if…./ …a success)

1. Our fathers and mothers work hard to bring us up. We should be thankful to them. (强调句 It is…that /… ) It is our parents who/that work hard to bring us up, so we should be thankful to them.

2.Our teachers teach us , and make us learn a lot of knowledge . We should thank them. (We should thank our teachers for…)
We should thank our teachers for we couldn’t learn so much/ (be who we are )without their hard work.

3. When we have a thankful heart, we can realize how beautiful life is. (倒装句Only
with…)

Only with a thankful heart, can we fully realize how beautiful life is.

5.I hope you can use my topic. I wish the
activity will have an successful end.

I would really appreciate it if my topic is chosen. Wish the activity a great success

Make this paragraph logically and smoothly developed!
Secondly /On the other hand/For another thing…
In my opinion, para2. Thankfulness is a good idea. It is our parents

who brought us up through thick and thin, so we should thank them. We should thank our teachers, for we couldn’t learn so much without their hard work. As Chinese people, we should be thankful, because it is a good virtue from old China . Only with a thankful heart, can we fully realize how
beautiful life is. What`s more/Moreover…

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I’m Lihua, a student from Xin Hua Middle School. I often visit your website, where I got the wonderful news that you’re looking for topics from students all over the world. Here, I’m writing to recommend one. In my opinion, thankfulness is a good idea. Firstly, it is our parents who work hard to bring us up, so we should be thankful to them. Secondly, we should thank our teachers, for we can’t learn so much without their hard work. What’s more, thankfulness is also a traditional virtue in China. Only with a thankful heart can we fully realize how beautiful our life is. I would really appreciate it if my topic is chosen. Wish the activity a great success.

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