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Usain Bolt Born 8,21, 1986 Jamaica,1.96 meters ,hardworking, love ,determined, In 2008, at the Beijing Olympic Games, broke In 2009, in the World Championship ,Now,

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ain Bolt was born on August 21st, 1986 in Jamaica. He is 1.96 meters tall and he is hard-working, full of love and determined. In 2008, at the Beijing Olympic Games he broke the 100-meter and 200-meter world records. In 2009, in the World Championship he broke his own world records for the 100meter and 200-meter races again. Now he is working hard to realize his dream to break more world records.

审题的步骤
1、 2、 3、 4、 5、
文体 主体时态 人称 信息点整合 不要打草稿,但应有提纲

人物介绍

1.主题段 ---开头段

Birthday , birthplace and family background 2.拓展段---中间段
Appearance, qualities, interest /hobbies, education ,big events in one’s life 3.总结段---结尾段 evaluation

三段论

对人物做出综合性的评价。

人物简介的一般步骤:概况,外貌,教育,生平, Give the right order 评估

3)教育:education ( 2)外貌/性格appearance ,character ( 4)生平big events in his or her life ( in
( order of time )

5)评估evaluation ( 1)概况age, sex, birth-place, background
(

语法,句法高分tips
A. 概况 : 可以用分词短语,同位语结构,使文章简洁,通顺

译:钟南山1941年出生在广州,他是中 国最伟大的医生之一. 1) Zhong Nanshan was born in Guangzhou in 1941 and he is one of the greatest doctors in China. 1) Zhong Nanshan ,born in Guangzhou in 1941, is one of the greatest doctors in China. 2)Zhong Nanshan, one of the greatest doctors in China, was born in Guangzhou in 1941.

语法,句法高分tips
1.A. 概况 : 可以用分词短语,同位语结构,使文章简洁,通顺

译:费孝通,我国著名的社会学家和社会活动 家,1910年11月2日生于一富裕家 庭.2005年4月24日因病逝于北京.

Born in a well-off family on November 2,1910, Fei Xiaotong, a famous Chinese Sociologist and active social worker, passed away for illness in Beijing on April 24, 2005 .

B.外貌,性格:

巧用with做定语

译:我的历史老师是个漂亮女人,她长着 两只大眼睛,留着长发. My history teacher is a beautiful woman who has two big eyes and long hair. My history teacher is a beautiful woman with two big eyes and long hair.

C. 教育经历: 可以用非谓语动词, 使文章精炼 1.在中山大学英语系毕业后,她继续学习, 获得了博士学位. After she had graduated from the English department of Zhongshan University, she went on further education and received a doctor's degree. Having graduated from the English department of Zhongshan University, she went on further education and received a doctor's degree.

可以用复合句倒装,非限定定语从句 D.生平: 等,润色文章
1.他对科学极有兴趣,也有音乐天赋.

Not only is he interested in science, but also he has a gift for music.
2. 他创了一个新的游泳记录,为中国队赢得了一
块金牌.

He set a new world record of swimming, which won a gold medal for China Team.

E.评估: 注意运用一些动词、形容词等短语、词组
1. 雷锋给我们树立了一个良好的榜样,我们都 很敬重他.

Leifeng set us a good example ,so all the people speak highly of him and all respect him .
2. 李时珍为医学做出了巨大的贡献.

Lishizhen made great contributions to Medical literature.

话题词汇,词组,句型:
? 外貌: good-looking相貌英俊的,funning-looking外表可笑的, ugly-looking丑陋的, ordinary-looking外貌平平的, white-haired白头发的,near/far-sighted 近/远视的, charming有魅力的, 时尚的fashionable, 苗条slim ? 性格气质: kind-hearted好心的, warm-hearted 热心的, absent-minded 心不在焉的,bad-tempered 坏脾气的,a strong will很强的意志力,naughty 淘气的, smart/bright 聪明的, wise睿智的,diligent 勤奋的, humorous 幽默的, attractive 有魅力的, talkative能说会道的,confident 有信心的, independent 独立的,patient 有耐心的

? 生日、出生地、年龄 ? …, (who was) born in …, is a… ? …, a …, is a … with a height of … and a weight of… ? 家庭背景: ? … was born in/ into a poor/rich family 出生在贫穷的/富裕的家庭 ? as a child of … years old, he… 还是个……岁的孩子时 ? spend his childhood in … 在……度过了他的童年 ? live a happy/hard life 生活很幸福/艰苦

? 教育背景: ? be admitted to …university考取……大学 ? graduate from …department of … university 从某大学某系毕业 ? receive/get a doctor’s degree 获取博士学位 ? 主要事迹: ? serve as…做某种工作 ? devote oneself /one’s effort to/ be devoted to 一生致力于 ? concentrate /apply oneself to 专注于 ? make up one’s mind to do…/be determined to do决心做 ? have a gift for / be gifted in 有……的天赋

? 成就: 1. one of the best/most important… 最好的/重要的……之一 2. set a …example to为……树立榜样 3. be honoured as…被授予……; win the …prize 获得……荣誉 4. make great contribution to 为……作出巨大贡献

根据下表内容写一篇120词左右的英语短 文介绍美国总统奥巴马。 提示:
1.文体

2.分段
3.时态 4.人称 5.信息点整合

姓名 出生时间 出生地点 家庭 梦想 教育 职业

评价

Barack Obama 1961年8月4日 Honolulu, Hawaii 父亲是肯尼亚黑人, 母亲是美国白人 当总统 1988年考入( Harvard Law School), 1991年博士学院 毕业后当律师, 大学讲师,后来一直从 政。 2008年11月4日, 在大选( 他( the general election)中击败( John McCain), 成为首位黑人总统 Obama的成功极大地激励了非裔美国人

S. P. O.

subject 主语 Short forms 缩略语 predicate 谓语 object 宾语 attribute 定语 Att

adverbial 状语 complement 补语 com predicative 表语 pre 同位语 app appositive C clause 从句

app S. Barack Obama , the son of a black ———————— —————— father from Kenya and a white ——————————————— P. American mother, was born in ———————— ———— Honolulu, Hawaii on August 4th, 1961. ——————————————————

S. When he was only a small a boy, he ——————— P. dreamt ——— of becoming the President of —————— —————— O. the United States. —————— = In his childhood,/ As a small boy, he had a great dream that he would become the President of the United States.

S. P. In 1988, he was admitted into Att c Harvard Law School , where he gained his doctor’s degree in 1991. =In 1988, he was admitted into Harvard Law School and he gained his doctor’s degree in 1991 there.

S. P. After graduation, he worked as a lawyer, lecturer and then took up politics. P. O. =After he graduated from Harvard, he worked as a lawyer, lecturer and then took up politics.

On November 4, 2008, Barack Obama S. defeated John McCain in the general O. P. election and became the first AfricanP. American President of the United

States.
=On November 4, 2008, Barack Obama won the general election defeating John McCain and became the first African- American President of the United States.

S. P. The success of Obama inspires O. African-American greatly. His Oc. P. S. achievements show that anyone can succeed as long as he works hard.

Student times No 6 B3

著名歌手丛飞的爱心事迹传遍全国,深入到每个人的心 中。现在请你根据下面的写作内容和写作要求,写一篇 短文,介绍丛飞的感人事迹。 [写作内容] 生平1. 1969年生于辽宁省盘锦市. 1992年毕业于沈阳音 乐学院。 2、2006年4月20日病逝于深圳。 主要事迹 1、从1994年8月开始资助贫困儿童,坚持11年之久,共 捐献300 多万,多达178名贫困儿童受助。 2、生前立下遗嘱——捐献眼角膜。 荣誉 一生获得许多荣誉,其中包括获得“2005感动中 国年度人物”的称号 [写作要求] 必须使用5个句子介绍全部所给的内容. 参考词汇:捐献眼角膜donate cornea 沈阳音乐学院Shenyang Conservatory of Music 2005感动中国年度人物2005CCTV Moving China Award

Cong Fei’s spirit lives on Cong Fei, born in Panjin, Liaoning Province in 1969, graduated from Shenyang Conservatory of Music in 1992. From August 1994, he began his 11-year cause of aiding poor children in mountainous areas, donated more than 8 million yuan and aided up to 178 poor children. In his life, he got many honors, one of which is the 2005 CCTV Moving China Award. Before his death, he made a will --- to donate his corneas. Cong Fei passed away on April 20, 2006, but his spirit will live on.

主要问题
1. 2. 3. 4. 5. 6. 7. 人名表达法 地名表达法 Choose-chose-chosen 时态 Article In order to his country His many novels

假如你叫李明,你的美国朋友布鲁斯开始学习中 国文学,来信询问鲁迅其人及作品。你回信介绍 鲁迅,内容如下: (1)鲁迅,原名周树人,浙江绍兴人 (2)为了国家,弃医从文。 (3)著名的作家,思想家,而且还是中国现代文学 的开创者. (4)小说被译成多种文字,并被制成电影,如 《阿Q正传》、《祝福》这两部影片。 (5)一些作品还被选入了中学和大学课本。 参考词汇:《阿Q正传》:The True Story of AH Q 《祝福》:The New Year’s Sacrifice 注意:介绍必须包括所有内容要点,但不要逐条译成 英语. [写作要求]只能使用5个句子表达全部内容。文章 首尾已给出,不算字数。 [评分标准]句子结构的准确性,信息内容的完整性.

Dear Bruce, I was glad to know you began to study Chinese literature. Now let me tell you something about Luxun. ______________________________________ ______________________________________ ______________________________________ _____. Since you are learning Chinese literatures, I think reading Lu Xun’s novels will help you to know more about it. Yours, Li Ming

Dear Bruce, I was glad to know you began to study Chinese literature. Now let me tell you something about Luxun.

Born in Shaoxing, Zhejiang Province, Lu Xun with real name Zhou Shuren abandoned the study of medicine because he thought he could change society more through writing. Not only was Lu Xun a wellknown Chinese writer, thinker, and translator, but also he was the father of modern Chinese literature. His novels have been translated into many languages and some of novels have been made into films, such as The True Story of AH Q and The New Year’s Sacrifice. Some of his novels have been collected in high school and college textbooks.
Since you are learning Chinese literatures, I think reading Lu Xun’s novels will benefit a lot.
Yours, Li Ming

请根据以下资料说明,使用5个规范句子描述全 部所给信息内容。
姓名 学校 地址 出生年月 身高 李华 育才中学 头发颜色 全家人口 中国广州育才路138号 父母职业 1989年10月1日 爱好 180cm 掌握外语情况 黑色 3人 教师 集邮和硬币 英语

写作内容及要求 1、标题:Something about Li Hua 2、必须使用5个句子介绍全部所给内容。 3、将5个句子组成连贯的短文。

Something about Li Hua

Lihua, a student from Yucai Middle School, who is 180cm tall with black hair was born on Oct 1st 1989. His family, which is at 138, Yucai Road, Guangzhou, China, has get three people. Both his parents are teachers. Lihua has two hobbies, which are collecting stamps and coins. His knows English well and can speak perfect English.


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