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2007-2014 广东高考英语基础写作课件


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基础写作

评分标准
基础写作主要考查考生语言结构的应用能力:能够用正确、规 范的语言表达特定的内容。 一、基础写作评分原则 1.本题总分为 15 分,按 3 个方面给分。 2.评分时, 首先根据文章句子结构的准确性、 信息内容的完整性 和连贯性,初步确定其所属档次,然后以该档次的要求衡量、确定 或调整档次,最后给分。

3.只能使用 5 个句子表达全部的内容。 4.评分时, 应注意信息内容要点、 应用词汇和语法结构的准确性、 上下文连贯性及语言的得体性。 5.拼写与标点符号是语言准确性的一个方面, 评分时, 应视其对 交际的影响程度予以考虑。英、美拼写及词汇用法均可接受。

二、基础写作评分标准 7~8 语 言 具有很好的语言运用能力;语法和句子结构准确 性高,词汇方面使用较好,只有少许错误。 具有较好的语言运用能力;语法和句子结构准确 5~6 性较好,有一些语法结构或词汇方面的错误,但 不影响理解。 3~4 语言运用能力一般;语法和句子结构基本准确, 语法结构或词汇方面的错误不影响理解。 语言运用能力较差;语法和句子结构基本不够准 语 言 0 备注 1~2 确,语法结构或词汇方面的错误较多,而且影响 了句子意义的理解。 语言运用能力很差;语法、句子结构、词汇错误 很多,句子意义无法理解。 每多或少写一个句子,扣 1 分。

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包括了所有信息内容。 包括了大部分信息内容。 包括了基本信息内容。 包括了小部分信息内容。 包括了少许信息内容。 没有包括所提供的信息内容。 内容连贯,而且结构紧凑。 内容连贯性比较好,而且结构比较紧凑。 内容连贯性较差,而且结构不够紧凑。 内容缺乏连贯性,而且结构松散。 文不对题,给 0 分。

考情搜索 广东高考· 完成时 (2007-2013年高考回顾)
? 第一节 基础写作(共1题;满分15分)

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(2007· 广东)

上周,我们以“谁是你的偶像”为题,在 2 600 名学生中进行 了一次调查(survey)。以下是调查数据: 偶像(idol) 伟人 父母 影视明星 体育明星 没有偶像 女生 18% 25% 50% 6% 1% 男生 18% 11% 14% 48% 9%

写作内容 根据以上数据,写一篇短文,包括以下内容: 1.调查时间、调查问题以及调查对象; 2.男女生在以明星为偶像方面的差异; 3.父母在男女生偶像中的排序差异; 4.男女生在以伟人为偶像方面的异同; 5.你的偶像及理由。

? (2007广东高考)基础写作:参考范文 ? Last week,we did a survey among 2 600 students on “Who Is Your Idol”. The survey shows that half of the girls choose film and TV stars as their idols,while 48% of the boys choose sports stars. As the data shows, “parents” ranks the second for the girls, but the “great men” for the boys. However, the percentage of the boys choosing “great figures” is the same as that of the girls. As for myself,Thomas Edison is my idol, because his inventions have greatly changed our life.

D (2008· 广东) 你很荣幸地成为 2008 北京奥运会的一名志愿者,负责编写奥运比赛 项目的英语介绍。 写作内容 请根据以下中文提纲,编写射击项目的英语介绍: 背景:射击最初只是生存工具,19 世纪末才发展成为一项体育运动。 1896:第一次成为奥运项目 1904:中断 1928:中断 1932:重回奥运会 1968:第一次允许妇女参加奥运射击比赛 现状:稳步发展,1896 奥运会只有三项射击项目,现今有 17 项。 写作内容 根据以上情况写一篇采访报道,并包括如下内容: 1.采访的时间、对象和主题; 2.中小学生近视的发生率及人数; 3.专家解读。

? (2008广东高考)基础写作:参考范文 ? The Olympic Event—Shooting ? At the beginning shooting was only a way of life. It was not until the late 1800s that it developed into a sport. In 1896 it became an event of Olympic Games for the first time, but was paused twice,separately in 1904 and in 1928. Luckily, it was admitted into the Olympic Games again in 1932 and in 1968 it was open to women for the first time. Now the event are growing steadily with the number of Olympic shooting ranging from three at the 1896 Games to seventeen events now.

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情况: 时间:上周末

(2009· 广东)

你是校报小记者,最近进行了一次采访。以下是这次采访的

对象:眼科医生(eyedoctor)王教授 主题:我国中小学生近视(shortsightedness)问题 基本信息:(1)发生率:略高于 50% (2)人数:世界第一 专家解读:(1)原因:很复杂 (2)治疗:没有哪一种药物能治愈近视 (3)建议:不要过度用眼;多参加户外活动 (4)特别提示:如何握笔写字也和近视有关

? (2009广东高考)基础写作:参考范文 ? Last weekend I had an interview with Professor Wang, an eyedoctor,about the problem shortsightedness. According to Professor Wang,a little more than half of the students in middle and primary schools are suffering from it,rating the first in the world consequently. Related experts say that the causes leading to it are very complicated and up to now no medicine has been found to cure it. It is suggested that we students should not overuse our eyes and it’s of great help to our eye health to participate in more outdoor activities. Meanwhile another tip from the experts is that the problem has something to do with how we hold the pen while writing.

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(2010· 广东)

以下是一则关于中国政府决定禁烟的报道的主要内容。 内容:公共场所禁烟 实施时间:2011 年 1 月 1 日起 实施范围:全国 目标:所有室内公共场所无烟 措施:张贴禁烟标志 相关数据: ?1?吸烟人数:约 3.5 亿 ?2?分布:男性 75%;女性 25% ?3?受二手烟影响人数:约 5.4 亿 ?4?因二手烟死亡人数:超过 10 万/年
参考词汇:二手烟 secondhand smoke 写作内容 请根据以上内容给学校英语墙报写一篇通讯,内容包括: 1.禁烟决定的内容及实施的时间和范围; 2.目标和措施; 3.相关数据。

? (2010广东高考)基础写作:参考范文 ? The Chinese government has decided to ban smoking in public places across the country. This decision,which aims to make all indoor public places smokefree,will come into effect from the first day of 2011.To this end,nosmoking signs will be put up in all indoor public places. Currently China has about 350 million smokers,among whom 75% are men and 25% are women. Around 540 million people are affected by secondhand smoke,which causes 100,000 deaths per year.

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以下是一本图书的基本信息及相关报道。 基本信息: ?1?书名:Battle Hymn of the Tiger Mother ?2?作者:Amy Chua,美籍华人,耶鲁大学教授 ?3?出版时间:2010 年 ?4?内容:作者用中国传统方式教育两个女儿的故事 ?5?效应:引发中美教育方式孰优孰劣的讨论 相关报道: ?1?中文版:2011 年初开始在中国销售 ?2?意外反应:多数中国妈妈不赞同作者的做法 ?3?最新消息:17 岁的大女儿已被哈佛大学和耶鲁大学录取
参考词汇:耶鲁 Yale;哈佛 Harvard 写作内容 根据以上信息写一篇图书介绍,内容包括: 1.图书的基本信息; 2.图书的相关报道。

? (2011广东高考)基础写作:参考范文 ? The book Battle Hymn of the Tiger Mother written by Amy Chua, a Chinese American,who is a professor in Yale University, was published in 2010.The book is about how the author educated her two daughters with Chinese traditional education mode, which brought about heated discussion about which is better between Chinese education mode and American education mode. In early 2011, the book came onto the market in China. Contrary to people’s expectations, most of the Chinese mothers are not in favor of the author’s way she educated children. However, according to the latest news, her elder daughter, has been admitted into Yale University as well as Harvard University.

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(2012· 广东)

你接受了一项写作任务,要为英语校报写一篇人物介绍。 【写作内容】 请根据以下信息,介绍一位传奇人物。 姓 名:Allan Stewart 国 籍:澳大利亚 出生日期:1915年3月7日 世界纪录:2006年获硕士学位*时年龄最大 学习态度:挑战自我,永远为时不晚。 第一个学位:1936年获得 第二个学位:医学博士** 第三个学位:80多岁时决定学习法律,2006年获得硕士学位。 第四个学位:2012年通过网络学习获得,善于合理安排学习 时间,受到老师表扬。 *硕士学位:master’s degree; **博士doctor

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? (2012广东高考)基础写作:参考范文
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Allan Stewart, a great man, who was born on March 7, 1915 in Australia, became the oldest man when he gained his master’s degree in 2006, which was a new world record. He, always challenging himself, thought it never too late to study and resulted in gaining his first degree in 1936. After he got the medical degree as his second degree, he made a decision to study law when he was 80 years old and got his third degree, law degree, in 2006. To our surprise, he got his fourth degree in 2012 by studying on the Internet. His teacher praised that he was good at arranging his all time, which was the point of his success.

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A (2013· 广东) 你接受了一项写作任务,要为英语校报写一篇时事快讯。 [写作内容] 请根据以下信息,写一篇关于移民火星的快讯。 志愿者的选拔 到2015年,在全球选出约30名去火星的志愿者 志愿者的条件 至少18岁 做好不回地球的准备 愿与他人保持良好的关系 专家观点 火星条件太艰苦 面临严寒气候、孤独和恐惧 志愿者观点 厌倦地球生活,想体验火星生活 如果成功,就是人类英雄

? 火星:the Mars

? (2013广东高考)基础写作:参考范文
? It is reported that thirty volunteers who are at least 18 years old will be chosen from the whole globe and sent to the Mars by the year of 2015. The volunteers must make a full preparation that there is almost no chance to return to the earth once they are immigrated to the Mars. What’s more, it is greatly important for them to try to keep a good relationship with other members. Experts strongly warned that the living conditions on the Mars are very hard, for not only the extremely cold climate would they meet with, but also loneliness and fear(省略). On the contrary, the volunteers insist that they have got tired of the life on the earth, so greatly being eager to experience the unknown, mysterious life on the Mars; meanwhile, if they would be succeeded, they would get the honor to be heroes of human beings.

提分策略 1.首先要认真审题。读懂题目所给的信息,初步确定 要点内容,并可用序号标出以免遗忘。 2.对于文字提示的写作,要注意根据表达的需要选择 恰当的时态。 3.对于表格提示的写作,特别要注意重新组织所给的 材料,不能依据表格逐条地翻译。 4.使用提纲做到:要点条理化,程序化,统筹安排布 局。 5.要刻意把好语言关。要用自己最熟悉的句型结构和 词语, 力求文意通顺, 语言准确。 没有把握的词句不要写, 确有把握的可以锦上添花。

6.遇到一时想不起的词语,需变通。可以用同义或近义 词代替,也可以用否定词加反义词来表达,亦可变换句式。 不可钻牛角尖,更不能生造词语,汉化表达。 7.注意文章的长度。看具体内容而定,如果内容多,应 多用复杂句式; 如果内容不多, 为了达到词的限数应多用简 单句式,并适当增补合理内容。 8.注意保持卷面整洁,书写工整清楚。书写的好坏会直 接影响阅卷老师的情绪。 9.最后应注意复查全文。看内容要点有无遗漏,标点、 格式、大小写是否规范,是否有语病等。

? 句型变式欣赏: ? 1. 从句、并列句与非谓语之间常常可以互 相转换 ? 2. 说明性文章多用定语从句以及过渡词, 记叙性文章多用状语从句和非谓语动词, 图表文章多用定语从句和非谓语动词。 ? 3. 特殊句式依情况而定。

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? 常见失分点 由于5句话小作文重点考查学生语言学习的基本功,所以学生 要避免一些常见的语言语法错误。 1.逗号错,不间断句子。在5句话小作文中很多学生由于不能在 规定的句数内完成所有信息,常犯此错。 It was raining hard,they could not work in the fields.(×) 此句为句式结构错误,针对本句我们有以下几种改法: a.It was raining hard;they could not work in the fields. (把逗号改成分号,因为这是两个独立的分句。) b.It was raining hard. They could not work in the fields. (把逗号改成句号,也形成两个独立单句。) c. It was raining so hard that they could not work in the fields. d. It was raining hard so they could not work in the fields. c句和d句则是分别加上了连词so...that...和so,把两个分句转 换成了复合句。

? 2.句子结构不平衡 ? A man is judged not only by what he says but also by his deeds. (×) ? 分析:这个句子的表达缺少结构性与平衡性,not only与but also两个连词引导的结构不能并列,没有语感美,我们改成: A man is judged not only by what he says but also by what he does. 同样的道理,我们看看这个句子: ? We thought she was charming, intelligent, and an independent woman. (×) ? charming,intelligent是形容词,和an independent woman 这个名词词组在结构上不能并列,所以,我们要么都换成形容 词,要么改成名词中心语: a. We thought she was charming, intelligent, and independent. b. We thought she was a charming, intelligent, and independent woman.

? 3.单词运用错误 ? 写作中常见考生因分不清单词的词性而产生错误。大致有:

? a.将vi.用成vt.如: return the place应改为:return to the place ? b.将adj.用成vt.如: Please present on time. 应改为: Please be present on time. c.将[U]n.用成[C]n.如:a good news 应改为: good news ? d.将adj./adv.使用错误:如: a new built school改 成 a newly-built school ? e.句子的主谓不一致:如:A large number of beautiful buildings has been built.句中has应改为: have ? f.常用词拼写错误:如:beautiful写成beautful; data(数据)写成dater;commit写成comit

? g. 不规则动词的过去式的拼写错误是很普遍 的现象, ? 如:visitted/hurted/writed等。 ? h.不定冠词的使用错误:如: ? send a email to you 改为(an) ? Even a overpass has been built改为(an) He graduated from an university.改为((a) ? i.关联词或连词的使用错误:如: We wonder if we could reform the present test system.改为(whether)

? 4.时态错误 ? 动词时态的错误是高考英语写作中最常见的错误之一, 也是考生运用语言能力差的显著标志之一。陈述讨论 的语句通常用一般现在时,如:学生针对公园是否应 收门票的讨论应写成 ? Sixty of the students of our school think it is unnecessary to charge an entrance fee.They think that...而很多学生会写成Some people thought that... ? 5.习惯用语使用错误 ? 如:将to my surprise表达为to my surprised; ? 将in my spare time表达为at my spare time; ? 将He didn’t lose heart though he failed.表达为He didn’t lose his heart though he failed.。

? 6.there be句型使用错误 ? 写作中很多学生受汉语思维的影响,在使用there be句型时往往出现be动词和实义动词连用的情况: There are a lot of students discuss about the issue.处理方法有三个: ? a.(不使用“there be”句型)改为:A lot of students discuss about the issue. ? b.(将动词改为分词形式)改为:There are a lot of students discussing about the issue. ? c.(使用定语从句)改为:There are a lot of students who discuss about the issue. ? 7.无主句 ? 如:Shenzhen,a beautiful seaside city,which is located in the south of China. ? 改为:Shenzhen,a beautiful seaside city,is located in the south of China.

? (1)While he was walking in the street,he met Tim. ? While walking in the street,he met Tim. ? Walking in the street,he met Tim. ? ? ? ? (2)After he finished his work,he left here. He finished his work before he left here. After finishing his work,he left here. Having finished his work,he left here.

? (3)As soon as he got home,he began to cook. ? On getting home,he began to cook. ? Hardly had he got home when he began to cook. ? No sooner had he got home than he began to cook. ? (4)The ship changed its course because there was a storm. ? The ship changed its course because of the storm.

? (5)Because he was ill,he didn’t go to school. ? He was ill,so he didn’t go to school. ? Being ill,he didn’t go to school. ? ? ? ? (6)If you work harder,you will succeed. Work harder,and you will succeed. Working harder,you will succeed. Only by hard work will you succeed.

? (7)Although he wasn’t successful,he was promising. ? Although not being successful,he was promising. ? He wasn’t successful but he was promising.
? (8)Because he was weak,he couldn’t say a word. ? Being weak,he couldn’t say a word.

? (9)He was tired and hungry and went home. ? Tired and hungry,he went home.
? (10)We depended on our own effort and overcame all the difficulties. ? Depending on our own effort,we overcame all the difficulties.

? (11)The manager was filled with apologies and walked into the room. ? Filled with apologies,the manager walked into the room.

? (12)Because the Silver Fern(银蕨) is strong and easy to grow,it can be seen to reflect the spirit of survival of the Europeans who first arrived in New Zealand in the late 17th century. ? Strong and easy to grow,the Silver Fern can be seen to reflect the spirit of survival of the Europeans who first arrived in New Zealand in the late 17th century.

? 写作内容 ? 下面是因特网的一些主要用途: ? 我们可以通过网络看国内外新闻,获取其他 信息通讯。而且我们还可以阅读各种书籍, 自学外语,了解世界。 ? We can read news both at home and abroad and acquire other information on the internet as well. ? What’s more,the Internet offers us good accesses to read various kinds of online books , learn foreign languages by ourselves and have a further and wider sight on the world.

? 这学期你校志愿者服务中心开展了一项“Big Brothers and Sisters” 活动。 ? 内容:我们像大哥哥大姐姐辅导那些孤儿或 留守儿童的学习并和孩子们交流 ? This term we conduct\run a volunteer project called “Big Brothers and Sisters”. ? We help those children whose parents have died or left home to study and chat with them, just as if we were their elder brothers and sisters.

模拟· 进行时 A 假设你是李宏,你的英国朋友 Jill 将于今年 9 月来广东读 大学。他写信向你咨询外国人如何在中国考取小汽车驾驶执照 的问题。 写作内容 请根据以下中文提纲,用英文给 Jill 写封回信。 报名条件:16~70 周岁;身高不低于 150 厘米 流程:报名——到指定医院体检——交通法规笔 试——两个月左右的驾驶培训——驾驶考试 费用:约 4 000 元人民币 其他:如果已有国外驾照,就只需参加笔试,费用 约 300 元人民币。

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写作要求 1.只能使用5个句子表达全部内容; 2.开头和结尾已给出,不计入总句数。 评分标准 句子结构准确,信息内容完整,篇章结构连贯。 Dear Jill, Glad to receive your letter of April 15.Now I will tell you how to apply for a driving license here in China. _____________________________________________ _____________________________________________ _____________________________________________ _____________________________________________ I am looking forward to meeting you in China. Love, Li Hong

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Dear Jill, Glad to receive your letter of April 15.Now I will tell you how to apply for a driving license here in China. To meet the requirements of application,you must be between 16 and 70 years old and no shorter than 150 centimeters. After you have signed up for the test,you need to have a physical examination in an appointed hospital and then take a written exam on traffic rules and regulations. After that,you should practice driving for about two months before taking the driving test. The total cost of all these will be about 4,000 yuan. However, if you have a valid driving license of your country,you will only need to pass the written exam to obtain a Chinese driving license at a cost of about 300 yuan. I am looking forward to meeting you in China. Love,

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? 假设你是一位心理辅导老师,你的一名学生因为考试成绩 不好而向你求助。针对他的情况,请你以“Marks Don’t Mean Everything”为题,写一篇短文开导他。 ? 写作内容 ? 1.成绩好坏并不意味着一个学生的优劣; ? 2.成绩可以通过自身的努力得到提高; ? 3.要学会调整心态,争取进步; ? 4.只要自己付出,就没有什么可后悔的。 ? 写作要求 ? 只能用5个句子表达全部内容。 ? 评分标准 ? 句子结构准确,信息内容完整,篇章结构连贯。 ? Marks Don’t Mean Everything ? _____________________________________________ _____

? 参考范文 ? Marks Don’t Mean Everything ? It is common that some students’ parents and teachers consider marks as everything,but in fact, marks only show whether one gains certain achievements more or less in a certain period of time. It does not mean students who get high marks are top or excellent ones. What’s more,marks can be truly improved if you work hard at your lessons. However hard you feel at present,you will be happy in the future,so you should adjust your mind to reality and make up your mind to make progress. As a matter of fact,if you put your heart into your study,whatever the result is,there is nothing left for you to regret.

C 写作内容

你的英语老师要求你在班上用英文向同学们介绍你的英 语写作方法和心得。请根据下表提供的中文提纲,选择相关的 信息写一篇发言稿。 学习方法 学习效果 背诵范文 运用英语思维,进行模仿性写作 多阅读英文文章 吸取语言材料 多听英文广播 提高听力水平 学习语法 正确表达 多写日记 提高遣词造句的能力 多练习口语 提高口头表达能力 参考他人的习作 取长补短

写作要求 1.只能用 5 个句子表达全部内容; 2.开头和结尾已给出,不计入总句数。 评分标准 句子结构准确,信息内容完整,篇章结构连贯。 Boys and girls, Now I would like to tell you how I learn English writing. _____________________________________________________ That’s all.Thank you.

? 参考范文 ? Boys and girls, ? Now I would like to tell you how I learn English writing. ? Firstly,I often recite good English articles, which helps me think in English when I imitate English writing. Secondly,I also read English articles widely so that I can take in as many language materials as possible. Thirdly,in order to make myself understood,I think it is important to learn about some grammars,listen to the radio and practice speaking English a lot. Fourthly,I keep a diary every day so that I can learn by writing. In addition,I often refer to others’ articles to know what I need and what I can learn from others. ? That’s all. Thank you.

典题突破
Test 1 假设你是新华中学高二(3)班的学生张明。 最近你们学校开 展了题为“理想高三”的征文比赛活动。 请你根据以下内容要 点写一篇英语短文参加比赛。 写作内容 1.简单做自我介绍; 2.高三学习时间规划; 3.对业余活动的设想。 写作要求 只能用 5 个句子表达全部内容。 评分标准 句子结构准确,信息内容完整,篇章结构连贯。

参考范文 I’m Zhang Ming,a student from Class 3,Grade 2, Xinhua Middle School,and I will become busier with my studies next term to prepare for the coming college entrance examination.To be honest,we need some free time to relax ourselves instead of studying hard all day long,especially on weekends and on holidays,which is of great help for us to study effectively.In addition,I want to take part in some sports and games in my spare time at school,which can help us to keep healthy.As for the group activities,I’d like to get the chance to attend some amusing parties held by our class or school.I’m sure that I will have a colorful and meaningful Senior Three year.

Test 2 假设你是学校英语报的小记者,上周你以“你支持 低碳生活吗?”为主题对学校的300名学生进行了一次调 查。以下是你在调查中收集的信息:

写作内容 请你根据调查信息为英语报写一篇报道, 包括如下内 容: 1.受访学生对低碳生活方式的态度; 2.受访学生现在的做法及其理由; 3.呼吁大家过低碳生活。 写作要求 1.只能用 5 个句子表达全部内容; 2.开头已给出,不计入总句数。 评分标准 句子结构准确,信息内容完整,篇章结构连贯。 Last week a survey concerning lowcarbon life was carried out among 300 students in our school.________ _______________________________________________

参考范文 Last week a survey concerning lowcarbon life was carried out among 300 students in our school.When asked about their attitudes to this lifestyle,a majority of 83% show support in a bid to preserve the limited amount of resources.They take measures such as going to school by public transportation,saving as much water and electricity as possible in daily life,and using environmentally friendly bags instead of plastic ones for shopping.Yet the remaining 17% seem rather indifferent and reluctant to change their current lifestyle.In their opinion,the effort of an individual is just too small to count.However, when we work together, we can make a great difference, so I hope more people can live a lowcarbon life to protect the Earth.

Test 3 生态旅游越来越受到人们的欢迎,但随着人数的增多,一些 问题逐渐暴露了出来。下面是对某班学生旅游中所出现的问题进 行的总结。请你根据提示的信息,对该情况进行介绍。 写作内容 现象:(1)乱扔垃圾; (2)污染水源; (3)毁坏树木; (4)追捕昆虫; (5)?? 原因:无意或者觉得好玩 措施:增强环保意识,普及环保知识

参考词汇:生态旅游 ecotourism;普及 popularize 写作要求 只能用 5 个句子表达全部内容。 评分标准 句子结构准确,信息内容完整,篇章结构连贯。

参考范文 With the popularity of ecotourism,more and more people are taking part in it,especially the middle school students.However, some problems arise alongside ecotourism, such as littering, polluting water,destroying trees,chasing or catching insects and so on.The students do like this just for fun or because they don’t realize the harm to the environment.Therefore,we should increase students’ environmental awareness,and popularize environmental protection knowledge among students.Only in this way can our ecotourism last long.

Test 4 近日, 你校进行了一次关于“中学生应该如何使用零 花钱”的调查。 写作内容 请根据下表内容写一篇文章, 反映调查结果并发表自 己的看法。 32%的学生认为:存入银行,养成节约的习惯 40%的学生认为:购买一些书籍,获取更多的知识 18%的学生认为:捐助给边远山区的孩子 10%的学生认为:其他方式 你的看法:??

写作要求 1.只能用 5 个句子表达全部内容; 2.开头已给出,不计入总句数。 评分标准 句子结构准确,信息内容完整,篇章结构连贯。 Recently,our school has carried out a survey on how middle school students use their pocket money. __________________________________________________ __________________________________________________

参考范文 Recently,our school has carried out a survey on how middle school students use their pocket money.Thirtytwo percent of the students would like to save it in the bank to cultivate a good habit of saving money,and they can take it out when they really need it.Four in ten students feel like buying some books which bring them more knowledge.Eighteen percent of the students are so warmhearted that they plan to offer their pocket money to children in remote districts.Only 10% students intend to spend it on their hobbies, like stamp collecting, music, sports and so on.Personally speaking,different people may have different choices on how to spend their pocket money ,but we should never waste it just eating rubbish food or playing electronic games.

Test 5 写作内容 中国的陆地面积约为 9 600 000 平方千米,气候因地而 异。请根据下列信息写一篇关于中国气候及农业的短文。 地区 冬季 夏季 炎热,潮湿 炎热,多雨 农作物 适宜种植水稻 主要种植小麦 不利于耕作,但部分 地区盛产各种水果 庄稼生长良好 南方 凉爽,湿润 北方 寒冷,干燥 西部 东部

终年干旱少雨 常年雨量充沛

参考词汇:潮湿的 humid 写作要求 只能用 5 个句子表达全部内容。

评分标准 句子结构准确,信息内容完整,篇章结构连贯。

参考范文 China covers an area of as large as 9,600,000 square kilometers,so the climate is different from area to area.It is suitable for growing rice in the south as it is cool and wet in winter,hot and humid in summer.Wheat is mainly grown in the north because it is cold and dry in winter,hot and rainy in summer.The western part of China,dry with little rain all the year round,is not suitable for growing crops,but in some places varieties of fruits are produced.And the eastern part enjoys plenty of rain most of the year,so crops grow very well there.

Test 6 写作内容 假如你是校学生会的一名成员。新学期伊始,你要在学 校网站上写一则简短的告示,请同学们与学生会保持联系。 你列举了同学们可能存在的需求和学生会将做的工作: 1.欲加入学生会——即刻联络我们; 2.欲获得业余工作——学生会将提供帮助和建议; 3.欲为学生会提意见——学生会会非常重视并一一回复。 学生会的电子邮箱是:xueshenghui@univ.gz.cn。 写作要求 只能用5个句子表达全部内容。 评分标准 句子结构准确,信息内容完整,篇章结构连贯。

Contact Us! __________________________________________________________ Students’ Union
参考范文 Contact Us! New term begins and please stay in contact with the Students ’ Union.If you would like to join our Students’ Union, please do not hesitate to contact us.If you have interest in parttime jobs and would like some help and advice,we would be happy to assist.We will take your comments and suggestions seriously and will reply to your emails individually.Please email us at xueshenghui@univ.gz.cn whenever you have a need. Students’ Union

Test 7 写作内容 假设你是赵明,想申请到一家外资企业工作,对方要求 你用英语写一篇短文,介绍自己的基本情况。短文需包括以 下内容: 姓名:赵明 出生年月:1994年2月 出生地:云浮市 学历:2001~2007年光明小学;2007~2010年云浮市第 一中学 所学课程:语文、数学、英语、物理、化学、电脑等 特长:英语、电脑 业余爱好:集邮、流行音乐

写作要求 只能用 5 个句子表达全部内容。 评分标准 句子结构准确,信息内容完整,篇章结构连贯。
参考范文 I studied in Guangming Primary School and I went to No.1 Middle School of Yunfu the following three years.The main subjects I studied at school included Chinese,maths,English,physics,chemistry and computer.I like English and computer best and I am very good at them.In my spare time, not only do I enjoy listening to music,but also I love collecting stamps.

I’m Zhao Ming,born in Yunfu in February,1994.From 2001 to 2007,

Test 8 广东省省情调查研究中心走访了广州番禺区(Panyu District)的居民,并发表了近期的调查报告。下表显示了 相关数据及居民对在附近建大型垃圾发电厂(garbage power plant)的态度。 调查项目 不满意(unsatisfactory) 不赞成(disapproving) 不信任(distrustful) 赞成建厂 百分比 原因

92.5% 97.1% 92.5% 1.7% 周边污染 将会严重

写作内容 请根据以上数据写一篇短文,包括以下内容: 1.调查时间、调查问题以及调查对象; 2.居民在“赞成”与“不赞成”方面的差异; 3.居民在“不信任”方面的比例及原因; 4.居民在“不满意”与“不信任”方面的异同; 5.你是否赞成及理由。 写作要求 只能用5个句子表达全部内容。 评分标准 句子结构准确,信息内容完整,篇章结构连贯。

参考范文 Recently,a survey was conducted among the residents in Panyu District,Guangzhou,on whether we should build a garbage power plant here.The survey shows that 97.1% of the residents oppose to the idea,while 1.7% of them favor it.As the data shows,people with a “distrustful” attitude take up 92.5% because they are worried about the fact that pollution here will be more serious.However,the percentage of the residents choosing “distrustful” and “unsatisfactory” is the same.I am in favor of the idea because this project will greatly benefit our district’s development.

Test 9 写作内容 Tom 邀请 Lisa 参加他这周的生日宴会, 但 Lisa 的父母出差 了,要到下周才回来,奶奶生病在床,需要人照顾,而且英语考 试即将来临。因此她无法前去参加生日宴会。 Lisa 感到十分抱 歉,只好写信辞谢。 写作要求 1.只能使用 5 个句子表达全部内容; 2.信件的格式和开头已给出,不计入总句数。 评分标准 句子结构准确,信息内容完整,篇章结构连贯。 Dear Tom, Thank you very much for inviting me to your birthday party.__________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________ Yours, Lisa

参考范文 Dear Tom, Thank you very much for inviting me to your birthday party.I’d love to go but I can’t.I’m really busy this weekend.My parents who are out on business are coming back next week,my grandma who is ill in bed has to be looked after by me,and I have to study for the coming English test.I’m very sorry that I can’t go to your party.Thank you for asking me and I hope you will have a good time. Yours, Lisa

Test 10 写作内容 “无车日”(Carfree Day)活动是一项节能环保的活动,请 你根据以下提纲介绍该活动的相关情况,并号召更多的城市和 居民参与到该活动中来。 活动背景:随着经济的发展,更多家庭拥有私家车,这造成了 严重的交通问题和环境污染 活动时间:每年 9 月 22 日 参 与 者:全国 108 个城市 活动目的:增强人们节约能源与保护环境的意识 活动内容:倡议人们选用公共汽车、自行车或步行的方式 活动效果:得到了全国人民的支持,取得了巨大的成功

写作要求 只能用 5 个句子表达全部内容。 评分标准 句子结构准确,信息内容完整,篇章结构连贯。
参考范文 With the development of the economy,more families have bought private cars,leading to serious traffic problems and air pollution.To raise public awareness of energy saving and environmental protection,Carfree Day is launched in 108 cities in China on September 22 every year.On that day,people are encouraged to take public transport,ride bicycles or walk.The campaign has gained much support all over the country, which is a real success.I hope more cities and their residents will take part in this type of activity.
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