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1. 概括的准确性
语言简洁明了,能客观、准确、全面地转述所给文字 材料。 2. 语言的规范性 语言合乎语法,地道自然。(无中国式语) 3. 内容的合适性 选材必需切题;内容符合写作要求;论据能证点 4. 篇章的连贯性 文章的主题(一个)要明确且贯穿全文;层次分明有条理; 衔接过渡自然。

You may begin like these:
? ? ? ? The passage is about… The writer tells us about… The story is about… The author tells us that…

? 【写作内容】 ? 1.以约30个词概括这则新闻的主要内 容; ? 2.然后以约120个词写一篇短文,就 “红包应该怎么花?”发表你的看法,内 容包括: ? (1)你对Ms Li的观点的看法; ? (2)你父母对你花红包的要求; ? (3)以你自己或他人的经历说明红包应 该怎么花才合理。

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The lunar New Year is, for most Chinese children, the happiest time of year. According to traditional customs, it is the time when children receive red envelops containing lucky money. But in recent years lucky money has become a source of conflict (冲突,矛盾)between children and their parents. ? Xiao Kai said to his mum, “Every year you force me to save my lucky money for the future. But this year I want to spend it all. I’m going to buy an iPad2. I think I’m old enough to make my own decisions now. I have the money and I should be allowed to use it as I wish.” ? For Kai’s worried mother, Ms Li, it is a problem that she has seen coming. “Each year he argues more and more strongly that he should be allowed to control his own money. In the past we let him keep a few hundred yuan and put the rest in the bank. We are trying to teach him the importance of money and saving. But now that he is getting older he is becoming more independent and harder to control. Have my husband and I failed as parents?” ? Kai’s response to his parents’ rules are simple: “How can I learn to manage my own money if I never get to see it or use it? Maybe you should trust me more.”

? 1.以约30个词概括这则新闻的主要内容; ? Like most children, Xiao Kai received some lucky money on the Lunar New Year, but he has different opinions with his parents on how to deal with the money.

? (1)你对Ms Li的观点的看法; ? I don’t agree with the opinion put forward by Xiao Kai’s mother, Ms Li. Since her son is getting more and more independent, he should be given the right to manage his lucky money. Besides, money-managing is an important subject for children to learn as they are growing up, and how can he do it well without practice?

? 2)你父母对你花红包的要求; ? Ms Li reminds me of my parents, who once adopted the same policy as her. I can still remember the disappointment and anger when I was asked to hand in nearly all my lucky money.

? (3)以你自己或他人的经历说明红包应该 怎么花才合理。 ? In my opinion, only when parents give children a chance can they learn how to manage their money. Take my friend, Lucy as an example. Her parents allow her to spend all her lucky money, without giving her pocket money for a certain period of time. Therefore, she has to use her lucky money carefully, and that’s why she is good at money-management.

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Like most children, Xiao Kai received some lucky money on the Lunar New Year, but he has different opinions with his parents on how to deal with the money. ? I don’t agree with the opinion put forward by Xiao Kai’s mother, Ms Li. Since her son is getting more and more independent, he should be given the right to manage his lucky money. Besides, money-managing is an important subject for children to learn as they are growing up, and how can he do it well without practice? ? Ms Li reminds me of my parents, who once adopted the same policy as her. I can still remember the disappointment and anger when I was asked to hand in nearly all my lucky money. ? In my opinion, only when parents give children a chance can they learn how to manage their money. Take my friend, Lucy as an example. Her parents allow her to spend all her lucky money, without giving her pocket money for a certain period of time. Therefore, she has to use her lucky money carefully, and that’s why she is good at money-management.

阅读下面的短文,然后按照要求写一篇150词左右的英语短文。 School News: Yesterday, Dec.14, the grand ceremony— To Build Our School an Ecoschool(国际生态学校), was held on the school playground.First, our geography teacher just gave us a very brief introduction about Ecoschool, which is one of five environmental education programmes run internationally by the

│典例导练
Foundation for Environmental Education (FEE).It is the biggest environmental education programme for young children all over the world.It aims to help the school improve the environment, raise their awareness of environment.Being a member of the programme, we students can share experience on the Internet with foreign students, which could provide a bigger stage for us. After that, the schoolmaster Mr. Liu made a speech titled “To save and treasure our resources, to love and be masters of the school!” He pointed out that we students should bear the responsibility to protect our environment and learn to save.

Finally, on behalf of all the students, Tan Peiying, Chairman of the Students’ Union, made a speech to call on us all to take action now to make our school a green one. 【写作内容】 1.以约30个词概括以上“校园新闻”的内容要点; 2.然后以约120个词就“节约资源,爱我校园 Save Resources and Love Our School”的主题发表你的看法, 内容包括: (1)你认为校园里存在哪些浪费的现象; (2)谈谈这些浪费现象带来的危害; (3)建设“国际生态学校”,你该做些什么?

【写作要求】 1.在作文中可以使用亲身经历或虚构的故事,也可以参照 阅读材料的内容,但不得直接引用原文中的句子; 2.作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。 【评分标准】 概括准确,语言规范,内容合适,语篇连贯 。


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