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高一英语写作训练(一)讲评

高考笔试部分试卷结构和题型
题型 题 序 I 语言知识 第一节:完形填空 及运用 第二节:语法填空 II 阅读
第一节:阅读理解 第二节:信息匹配

题量 15 10 20 5

赋分 时间/分 30 15 40 10 25 10 40 5

III

写作

第一节:基础写作 第二节:读写任务

1 1
52

15 25
135

10 30
120

总计

写作要求:
要求考生根题示 进行书面表达。考生应能:
1)清楚,连贯地传递信息,表达意思 2)有效运用所学语言知识

第一节:基础写作 命题规律: 形式采用中文提纲/表格 常考应用和说明文 内容要点完全给出:
没有设开放性要点,考生不可随意发表个人意见或观点。

只能使用五个句子:
句子结构准确 三条评分标准: 信息内容完整 篇章结构连贯
尽量用到并列句,复合句,非谓语动词短语、介词短语等来帮 助表达全部内容。

一、 书写潦草,卷面涂改。
二、 自由发挥自己的观点,字数超出太多。 三、 审题不仔细,信息内容不完整,缺少要点。

一、 句式错误。 三、动词形式错误 五、主谓不一致

二、 单词拼写错误。 四、词性使用错误 六、代词使用错误

七、名词单复数,可数与不可数 八、标点符号与大小写

一、句式错误
you ? I disagree with your think.
disagree with sb disagree to sth disagree on sth ? Friends in our life a play an important role.

Friends play an important role in our life. ? No matter the distance, we are willing to with our friends share joys.
No matter how far the distance is, we are willing to share joys with our friends.

一、句式错误
? When we encounter difficulties or frustrated, our friends help . When we are in trouble or feel frustrated, our friend will help us.
? You should treat your friends like you are treated want to be treated in the way by your friends .

? Don’t believe person who easy to leave you. Don’t believe in the person who leaves you easily.

二、 单词拼写错误。
1. Friend is very important in your lift. life 2. When we feel sad or have some differences,.... difficulties 3. Don’t belive in people who leave you easily,... believe 4. Than you should treat friends the way Then 5. The ture friend is… true
you want to be treated.

三、动词形式错误
1. We like share happiness with our friends. to share 2. I am disagree with you.
helping 3. Friends are always help us.

4. Although make friends is very difficult, ... making

5. When we upset or be in trouble,… are

四、词性错误
1. We are willing to share happy or sad with our friends. happiness sadness 2. When we meet difficult ,… difficulties 3. Don’t believe in those who leave you easy. easily

五、主谓不一致
1. Friends is important in our life. are 2. Don’t believe the person who leave you . leaves
3. I think friends plays an important role in our life.

六、代词错误
1. No matter how far you and him/her are from each other , ...

he/she 2. Friends can help our . us 3. I think I don’t agree with your. you 4. You friends also… Your

七、名词单复数,可数与不可数
1. When you are in troubles , ... trouble 2. You don’t want to make friend. friends

八、标点符号与大小写
afraid 1. I’m glad to hear from you . I But I disagree , ambut with you. because 2. Don’t believe in people who leave you. Because “ A a friend in need is a friend in need.”

1. Friends play an important role in our daily life. (黄奕东)

2. When we met difficulties or felt sad, it is friend who help us. meet feel helps (何松涛) 3. More importantly, when we meet difficulties and feel upset, it is friends that help us. (曾森源) 4. You should treat your friends as you want to be treated.(许文浩) 5. Last but not least, you’d better not to believe those who leave you easily. (纪株棋) 6. Although our friends are far from us, we still want to share our happiness and sadness with them. (罗晓宜) 7. You must learn to treat your friends the way you want your friends to treat you. (谢柯潼)

Dear Henry, I’m glad to hear from you, but I’m afraid I disagree

with you. As far as I’m concerned, friends play an important part /role in our daily life. When we are in trouble or feel upset, it is our friends who lend us a hand. We are willing to share our sorrows as well as our joys no matter how far away we are from each other. Please treat your friends the way you want to be treated. Besides, don’t believe in those who leave you easily because “ A friend in need is a friend indeed.”
Best wishes. I am looking forward to your reply. Yours truly, Xiao Weidong

Practice makes perfect! Study hard every day and improve your writing step by step:

? ? ? ?

加强基础词汇和基本句子结构学习 提高综合运用复合句的能力 注意句子间的过渡与衔接 仿写、背诵、熟读话题范文

While-writing: 一、句子结构必须正确。 单句: 主语+谓语+其他成分。
复合句:从句中须有主语、谓语,主句中须有主 语、谓语。

二、人称、时态、主谓必须一致。 三、运用一些自己熟练掌握的句型、短语、过渡词。

Thank you for listening!


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