【写作任务】 你们班同学以“什么是幸福”为主题举行了一场 讨论会，请根据以下不同观点，以“ On happiness”为 题写一篇英语短文，谈谈你对幸福的看法。 1．有人认为有钱就是幸福； 2．有人认为健康就是幸福； 3．有人认为从父母那里得到财富
就是幸福； 4．你自己的观点。 要求：1. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 2．词数100左右。
【写作分析】 第一步：认真审题 本单元的写作目标是能够简明扼要地写出文章 概要，能够写议论文，并且论据充分，演绎合理。 写议论文时，要明确写作的主题和对象，掌握正 确的用词和格式。写作时一般遵循以下几个步骤： (1)提出论点。首先要仔细审题，在此基础上根 据对题目的理解和要求提出论点。论点要简明扼 要、旗帜鲜明、通俗易懂、富有哲理性。
(2)给出论据。论据是用来说明论点的，要从各 个不同的角度和层次给出论据，层层展开，步步 深入。论据要典型，说理性要强，既可以是身边 的实例或可靠的报道，也可以是名人名言等。总 之，论据要充分，这样才能说明问题。 (3)得出结论。有了论据，就要围绕论点进行合 理的分析，作出恰当的逻辑推理和判断，以此证 明论点的正确性，最后推出结论。
第二步：提炼要点 1．possess a great deal of money 2．the secret to happiness 3．be in good health 4．enjoy whatever he likes 5．not have to work hard 6．value knowledge 7．agree with sb./sth. 8．do much for mankind
1．Some people believe that possessing a great deal of money is the secret to happiness. 2．They think if they have much money they will be able to buy anything they want. 3 ． If a person is in good health ， he will enjoy whatever he likes. 4．In this way they don't have to work hard and can have everything. 5．I don't agree with the above points. 6. I value knowledge, which makes me happy，for I can do much for mankind with knowledge.
【写作模板】 第一段：提出论点：Recently，we've had a discussion about... 第二段：论证正方与反方观点： Opinions are various on the question. Some students believe that...( 正方观点 )They think...( 正方论据 ). While some students think that...(反方观点)．They hold the view that...(反方论据)． 第三段：我的观点
【参考范文】 Happiness means different things to different people. Some students believe that possessing a great deal of money is the secret to happiness. They think if they have much money，they will be able to buy anything they want. Some students think happiness means good health. If a person is in good health, he will enjoy whatever he likes. Many other students wish to have much wealth from their parents. In this way they don' t have to work hard and can have everything.
I don't agree with the above points. We can't buy many important things with money, such as health, love and knowledge. I value knowledge, which makes me happy, for I can do much for mankind with knowledge. Although different people value happiness differently，my “wealth” of happiness is in my study.
【亮点展示】 1．本文具有论点、论据和论证三个要素， 符合议论文的写作特点。既有广度，也有深 度和力度，同时加入了个人观点。 2 ．作者在写作过程中使用了很多复合 句式，如： Some students believe that... ； They think if they...，they will be able to...I value knowledge，which makes me happy， for I can do...等等。
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