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主题:叙述你或你的朋友类似“揠苗助长” 的经历和感受

The story reminds me of a similar experience of my friend. He was once badly ill and went to see the doctor. The doctor gave him some pills, telling him to take them three times a day.

However, he failed to follow the doctor’s advice and took them 6 times a day. To his great surprise, he became worse. Just as the old saying goes, “More haste less speed”. No matter what we do, we should obey the law of nature. It is the same with our studies. Only by learning step by step can we achieve something.

一、句式模板 引出经历: (1)The story reminds me of my experience... 这个故事让我想起了我自己 的经历?? (2)This story reminds me of a similar experience of my friend. 这个故事让我想 起我朋友的一次相似的经历。

(3) I also had an unforgettable experience...我也曾有一次难忘的经 历?? (4) Take my personal experience in learning English for example. Three years ago, I... 就以我的亲身学习英语的 经历为例吧, 三年前, 我……

1.这个故事让我想起了我自己的经历…… The story reminds me of my experience... 2.这个故事让我想起我朋友的一次相似的经历。
This story reminds me of a similar experience of my friend.

3.我也曾有一次难忘的经历…… I also had an unforgettable experience... 4.就以我的亲身学习英语的经历为例吧, 三年前, 我…… Take my personal experience in learning
English for example. Three years ago, I...

感受启示: (1) From this experience I realize that it’s not easy but meaningful to be a journalist.通过这次经历, 我意识到做记者是
不容易但又有意义的。

(2) Only by learning step by step can we achieve something. 只有通过循序渐进地学 习, 我们才能有所成就。

? 1.通过这次经历, 我意识到做记者是不容易 但又有意义的。
From this experience I realize that it’s not easy but meaningful to be a journalist.

? 2.只有通过循序渐进地学习, 我们才能有所 成就。 Only by learning step by step can we achieve something.

以你的经历说明合作的重要性。

? 1.这个故事使我想起我第一次来到学校的经历。(remind…of …) ?The story reminds me of my experience ?when I first came to this school. ? 2.我的同学Sam对数学有极大的天赋,而我的英语相当好。 (show talent; while, be good at)

?My classmates, Sam showed great talent in maths while I was pretty good at English.

? 3.我害怕Sam会在考试中超越我,所以我不想帮助他。(fear, outperform) ?I feared that Sam would outperform me in the exams so I avoided helping him ? 4.我们分享学习方法,相互帮助。(share, methods) ? We shared learning methods and helped each other. ? 5.总之,合作是一个双赢的方法。 ? In a word, working together is a win-win method.

以你的经历说明合作的重要性。

? 翻译下面的句子: ? 1.这个故事是我想起我第一次来到学校的经历。(remind…of …) ? The story reminds me of my experience when I first came to this school. ? 2.我的同学Sam对数学有极大的天赋,而我的英语相当好。 (show talent; while, be good at) ? My classmates, Sam showed great talent in maths while I was pretty good at English. ? 3.我害怕Sam会在考试中超越我,所以我不想帮助他。(fear, outperform) ? I feared that Sam would outperform me in the exams so I avoided helping him ? 4.我们分享学习方法,相互帮助。(share, methods) ? We shared learning methods and helped each other. ? 5.总之,合作是一个双赢的方法。 ? In a word, working together is a win-win method.

二、写作技巧

经历感受通常只需包含“谁?干了 什么事?结果如何?”等, 然后再谈谈本 人对此次经历的看法及感受或是从这次 经历中得出了什么经验教训。

三、超级仿写 以你的经历说明合作的重要性。

I think the story can teach us that when we work together we can achieve more than when we compete. The story reminds me of my experience when I first came to this school. My classmates, Sam showed great talent in maths while I was pretty good at English. I feared that Sam would outperform me in the exams so I avoided helping him and viewed him as my competitor.

It was not until Sam suggested that we work together that I understood the importance and benefit of cooperation. We shared learning methods and helped each other. As a result, we both made progress in our studies and became topten students. In a word, working together is a win-win method.

Practice

读写任务 阅读下面的短文, 然后按照要求写一篇 150词左右的英语短文。

Share your journey with someone and half your fuel costs. The high price of fuel may be persuading tens of thousands more people to change their trip to work — by sharing the driving duties. Those who do share lifts with other people are being told they can save up to 2,000 a year in fuel costs and help prevent pollution.

For those who persevere, there can be great social benefits. Lift-sharers Jane and Steven, for example, it is not only lifts they are sharing now, but a house as well. Share books. Mr. Smith has made it a habit in the past year or so to pass on books after he’s read them. As he is reading, he thinks of someone who might enjoy the book next, so he hands it on.

Not only does it share the love of reading, it lets that person know I’m thinking of them. Share anything. Many famous films stars share experiences of joys or sorrows by writing blogs. Ordinary people also share their family photos or opinions about work, studies, health care, friends and so on.

[写作内容] 1.以约30词概括短文的主要内容; 2.然后以约120个词就“分享”的主题 发表看法, 内容包括: (1) 你愿意与人分享吗?为什么? (2) 说说某一次分享的经历; (3) 分享的利弊。

The passage encourages us to share with others because people get lots of benefits by sharing cars, houses, books and experiences. People can save money and spread happiness and love. Personally, I am too willing to share with others. As a student, I not only share the good moments but also all the difficult moments with my classmates.

Just as the saying goes, “Share your happiness with others, happiness doubles; share your sadness with others, sadness halves; share your love with others, love spreads.” So sharing plays an important role in our daily life.

This passage reminds me of a similar experience . Once, my classmate Tom forgot to bring his money for lunch so I shared my serving with him. We enjoyed the meal, talking and laughing. The shared meal often reminds us of the friendship between us in later life and we will never forget the happy time. It is sharing that strengthens the friendship between us.

Sharing with others has its own benefits. For one thing, it is moneysaving. For another thing, it can to some extent strengthen the tie between people and spread love and happiness among them. The only limitation is that your private things sometimes may be exposed to others.

HOMEWORK
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