这次读写任务的难度适中，从评卷的情况来看，同学们的写作水平有 所提高，例如，在句子的完整性和正确性方面有了进步；同时，可以运 用较为丰富的词汇表达。再者，非智力因素的失分情况明显减少。如书 写比以前工整了，卷面也比较整洁了。而在高考即将到来之际，如何使 自己的作文尽快提高一个档次呢？笔
者结合同学们的深圳二模读写任 务的高分答卷语料（20-23 分），建议大家在读写任务中灵活地套用以 下的高级句型和短语，这样可以避免很多语法错误和汉语式英语，更易 提高得分档次。 1.就我而言， As far as I’m concerned,/As for(to) in me/ ， favor of From my I’m the perspective/Personally speaking
fully(completely/totally/extremely) activity/action/event. 2.我坚信/相信…
(1)I’m firmly convinced that many effective measures should be taken. (2)I firmly believe that if we make joint( 共同的 )efforts to save energy in our daily life, the earth will become much more beautiful. (3)I hold an unshakeable belief that/I hold an opinion that/It’s my belief (view/opinion) that it will be a greener and more harmonious world with our joint efforts. 3.做某事是明智的。/建议 (1)It is advisable for us to reduce greenhouse gases and raise the awareness of energy saving.
(2) It is advisable for us to spare no efforts/make every effort to protect our environment. (3) It is advisable for us to reuse the water to do other things, such as watering the flowers and cleaning the floor. (4)To protect our environment, it is wise for us to walk or ride a bike instead of driving private cars. (5)It is suggested that we should walk instead of driving cars. 4.毫无疑问的是，…/无可否认的是，… (1)There is no doubt that I’ll make every effort to encourage my families and people around me to save energy as much as possible. (2)Undoubtedly, turning the lights off is not the only way to protect the environment. (3)No one can deny that we are able to do much more than we can imagine. (4)There is no denying that only when everyone takes action together to protect our environment, can we live a more harmonious life. 5.做某事是很有意义的。/做某事是很有必要的。 (1)It is significant for us to go to school on foot or by bus, instead of by car. (2)It is of significance for us to turn off the dripping taps when we don’t need to use them. (3)It’s significant for people to take action./ This activity is of great significance. (4)It is absolutely necessary for us to join in this activity. (5) It is extremely important for us to save energy. (6) It is absolutely necessary for us to spare no efforts to protect our environment (7) It is absolutely necessary for us to place/put greater emphasis on( 更 加 重 视 ) protecting our earth, which is also protecting ourselves. 6.应当、应该 (1)To prevent the environmental pollution from bad to worse, we are supposed to take some measures./we still have a lot to do. (2)We are supposed to turn off the lights when leaving the room./We are expected to drive less private cars. (3)We are supposed to do the things as follows. 7.不但…而且…
(1) Not only can it reduce greenhouse gases, but it also reminds people of saving energy. (2)Not only can it help us to save the limited energy, but it also raises/improves/increases/ enhances our awareness of environment protection. (3)Not only does it remind us of environment protection, but also it puts the plan/idea into action/practice. (4)It not only raises our awareness of the significance of energy saving, but also contributes to(促进) our environment protection. (5)It can not only appeal to us to save energy, but also can greatly convince us that small action in our daily life really counts. 8.不用说，/毋庸置疑， It goes without saying that the resources are in great shortage. 9. 是…的时候了/是到了……的时候 (1)It is high time for us to take effective measures to protect our environment in our daily life. (2) It is high time that we should take some actions(措施) to solve this problem. 10.只有当…时/通过， (1)Only when everyone takes action( 行动起来 ), can the earth become more beautiful. (2)Only by (in) this way/by doing this, can we live a happier and more harmonious life. 11.常言道，/正如俗话所说, /古话说 Just as an old saying goes, “Actions speak louder than words.” Therefore, in order to make our environment more beautiful, we should do every little thing. 12. 有影响，起（重要）作用 (1)Even small actions can make great differences. (2)Just remember every individual counts(起作用). (3)Although the action won’t make a difference to reduce greenhouse gases immediately, it can raise people’s awareness of environment protection and lead people to take active actions( 措施) to contribute to（促进） the protection.
13.值得牢记的是， (1)It is worth remembering that every individual counts(起作用). (2) It is worth remembering that every individual can make a great difference. 14.我非常赞同… I can’t agree more with this fantastic(极好的) idea. 15.我们决不能忽视… (1)Never/ On no account can we ignore the valuable consequences(结 果) brought by “Earth hour”. (2) Never/ On no account can we ignore the bad (negative) consequences（后果） by energy wasting./ brought by the greenhouse gases. (3) Never/ On no account can we ignore the importance of environment protection. 16. 一谈到……,/当谈论到…, /当提到 When it comes to our daily life, we are supposed to ride a bike instead of driving a car. 17. 被大家广泛承认的是,/人们普遍认为(认可、承认),/ 众所周知, (1)It is universally (widely) acknowledged that all energy in our earth is limited. (2) It is universally (widely) acknowledged that if everyone attaches great importance to the environment protection, we’ll have a brighter/bluer sky. (3)As is known to all, we can do a variety of / a diversity of/ varieties of/diversities of things in our daily life to protect our environment. 18. 利远大于弊 Though it may cause some losses in economy, the advantages of this activity far outweigh/ overweigh its advantages. 19.(我们能)得出结论
We can, therefore, draw (come to) a conclusion, that more actions(措 施) will bring good consequences（结果）. 20. 用分词作状语的句式 Seeing all the lights off, we are proud of the fact that we’ve made contributions to （做贡献）reducing greenhouse gases. 21. 用来过渡段落的主题句 (1)There are various/ numerous reasons/ causes accounting for(说明) it. (2)There are various ways to protect our environment, among which the easiest one is to turn off the lights when leaving the room (3)In our daily life, there are many things that we can do to protect our environment.. 再者，笔者根据同学们的深圳二模读写任务的答卷情况，提几点不容 忽视的问题。 1. 要分段！一般是按照写作内容的每一个要求或问题写一段。因此， 读写任务的文章要四段! 2. 文章主体段落的首句最好是段中的主题句。另外，段落要紧紧围 绕着写作内容来展开，不要离题。 3. 要用过渡词。如：for one thing, for another; on one hand, on the other hand; to begin with, more importantly, most importantly; for instance; take me as an example; consequently(因此), thus(因此); in brief, to sum up. 4. 要尽量做到文章的首段和尾段无错句错词，主体段落的首句用的 到位。5. 要特别注意检查句子的谓语动词是否用对。如：时态语
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