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浙江省台州市天台县2016年高三英语新高考复习课件 高考新题型之概要写作 (共23张PPT)


My temporary teacher Rose from Yuying-Middle School,who............ is looking forward to our cooperation and perfect performance.

Rosechen陈慧娇 育英中学

《普通高等学校招生全国统一考试英语 科

考试说明》

概要写作:
提供一篇350词以内的短文,要求考生基于该短文 写出一篇60词左右的内容概要。(满分25分)
词数少于40的和多余80的, 从总分中减去2分

评分原则
本题总分为25分,分5个档次给分 第五档 理解准确,涵盖全部要点。

4C原则
complete

(21-25) 能准确使用相应的语法结构和词汇。 correct

有效地使用了语句间的连接成分,使所完成的
概要结构紧凑。

coherent

完全使用自己的言语。 ﹏﹏﹏﹏﹏﹏﹏ concise:no copying

Argumentation (议论文) Forms of Literature

Exposition (说明文)

Narration (记叙文)

Writing Steps for narration summary????

Writing Step 1: Read for form,key information

What form of passage is it?
My name is Hua Fei and I am a sporting
robot of the 23rd century. I am an expert …

A. Argumentation B. A self-introduction

(Narration)
C. Exposition

Para 1:Basic information about the robot
? Name: __________ Hua Fei Who When

In the 23rd century ? When: ____________________

A sporting robot ? Occupation: ___________________
An expert at ..., ... turn, dive ... ? Ability: _______________________________ ? Prize won: _____________________________ Silver medal in the 78th Olympics What

* Basic information about Hua Fei: ? Name: __________ Hua Fei ? When: ____________________ In the 23rd century ? Occupation: ___________________ A sporting robot ? Ability: _______________________________ An expert at high flying exercises ? Prize won: ______________________________ Silver medal in the 78th Olympics * main idea (Para 1) : Hua Fei is a sporting robot of the 23rd century. He is an expert at high flying exercises. He took

part in the 78th Olympics and won a silver medal.

Tips: 1) write it in the third person.
2) focus on the main points and leave out examples.

Writing Step 1: Read

for form,main idea

para2-3:The 79th Olympics that Hua Fei took part in:
? Reasons for the failure:

Why

Programmer fell ill; __________________ Frightened; not confident; _____________________ A problem with ... _____________________

* His failure in the 79th Olympics: Programmer fell ill; ? Reasons for the failure: __________________ Frightened; not confident; A problem with ... ______________________________________
* main idea (Para 2-3): ill Before the competition, his programmer fell ____. frightened and no longer Knowing this, Hua Fei was __________ felt _________. confident In the day of the competition, there was a problem with the parachute. He fell from the sky and landed ________ heavily on a mountain.

WritingStep 1: Read

for form,key information

para4:The treatment of Hua Fei

How
lying in hospital bed ? Where: _________________________ ? What happened: _____________________________ Two broken legs and a fragile head ? Treatment: ________________________________ Two new legs and a bigger head

Writing Step 2: Make a summary(narration's 6factors)
who when where what why Hua Fei of the 23rd century 78th Olympic, 79th Olympic win a silver medal failed his programmer fell ill No longer confident a problem with parachute get treatment (with two new legs and even bigger head)

how

Writing Step 2: Make a summary(narration's 6factors)

How to polish your summary to meet the 4C requirements of criteria
? ? ? ? complete correct coherent concise(no copying)

Writing Step 3:Polish the sentences to meet 4cs to be concise(5 skills) ① I no longer felt so confident that I would win.
同义词替换

I no longer believe myself that I would succeed/achieve.
反义转换

I feel nervous/worried/anxious
that I would be defeated/lose/fail.
改变词性

I am lack/short of confidence that I would win.

Writing step 3: Polish the sentences to meet 4cs to be consise
复合句、简单句的互换


The fact that I might be defeated worries me.

句型转换


I was so nervous that I might lose the competition

It is the possibility of losing that makes me anxious.


Writing Step 3: Polish the sentences to be concise,meet4cs

Have a drill:rewrite the following main idea using the four skills and try to be concise(20words or so)

Para1:Hua Fei is a sporting robot of the 23rd century. He is an expert at high flying exercises. He took part in the 78th Olympics and won a silver medal.
Hua Fei, a sporting robot of the 23rd century, who is good at high flying, got a silver medal in the 78th Olympics.

Writing Step 3: Rewrite the sentences in other ways

Writing step 3: Polish the sentences to be concise

? Para 2-3:Before the competition, his programmer fell ill. Knowing this, Hua Fei was and no longer felt conficent. In the day of the competition, there was a problem with the parachute. He fell from the sky and landed heavily on a mountain.
Huafei was defeated in the 79th Olympics for his progmmer 's illness,which makes him nervous.What's the worse, his parachute went wrong .

Add twostep linking words to summary make the coherent passage coherent Writing 4: Make the

①Hua Fei, a sporting robot of the 23rd century, who is good at high flying exercises got a silver medal in the 78th Olympics. However/But/While/Though

② Huafei was defeated in the 79th Olympics for his progmmer 's illness,which makes him nervous.What's the worse, his parachute went wrong . As a result/Thus/Therefore/So ③ He is now in hospital with two broken legs and fragile head while he is still looking forward to next success.

Writing step 5:

Revise

4 “C” : complete, correct, concise, coherent

Hua Fei, a sporting robot of the 23rd century, who is good at high flying exercises got a silver medal in the 78th Olympics. Huafei was defeated in the 79th Olympics for his progmmer 's illness,which makes him nervous.What's the worse, his parachute went wrong. he is now in hospital with two broken legs and fragile head while he is still looking forward to next success.

( 68 words)

Writing Step 6: Clearly copy your draft to the paper

1.Read
2.Make a summary based on 6 elements of narration 3.Polish to be concise and to meet 4cs 4. Make it coherent 5. Revise (4C)

6. Neatly copy


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