2010 年短文改错 It was a chance of a lifetime to win the first prize on the Story Writing Show. All I had to do was to write a story or present it. My teachers have been telling me how great my wr
iting was. So if they had said was true, I would have a chance of winning the prize. What were better, I had useful help. There was Uncle Chen, gentleman living near my house, who was a very much famous writer. He agreed to reading my story and give me some advices on how to write like a real writer. 76. 去掉第二个 a 80. they 前加 what 84. reading 改为 read 77. on 改为 in 78. or 改为 and 76_______ 77_______ 78_______ 79_______ 80_______ 81______ 82______ 83______ 84______ 85______ 79. have 改为 had 83. 去掉 much
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2011 年全国卷 One of my unforgettable memory of my school in Xinjiang is that of lunches we brought from our homes. I hold my lunch-box in my hand when I was going to school. The smell from it was very good. Since the lunch bell finally rang, my friends and I met under a tall tree And had our lunches. My best friend Aigulie was used to share her Nang with me. Nang is a specially kind of cake in Xinjiang. I like them very much. Now Aigulie and I study at different colleges or we can only see each other during the summer vacation. I think over her a lot and I miss the food and the good time we had together.
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