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假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有 10 处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。 增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(^) ,并在其下面写出该加的词。 删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)花掉。 修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。 注意: 1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词; 2. 只允许修改 10 处,多者(从第 1 处起)不计分。 (一) Today I visited the Smiths---my fist time visit to a American family. They live in a small town. It was very kind for them to meet me at the railway station and drove me to their home. The Smiths did his best to make me to feel at home. They offered me coffee and other drinks. We have a good time talking and laughing together. They eager to know everything about China and asked me lots of question. In fact, they are planning to visit China in next year. 第一行:.去掉 time ;将第一个 a 改为 an 第二行: for 改为 of 第三行:drove 改为 drive ;his 改为 their 第四行:去掉 to;have 改为 had 第五行:eager 前加 were 第六行:question 改为 questions 第七行:in 去掉 (二) Dear Bob, Hello. I learn about you from my English teacher, Miss Wang. I’d like to your pen-friend, and get to know more about my country. First, let me tell you something more about myself. My name is Li Hua. I live in Beijing, where is the capital of China. I go to Hongqi Middle School. We study quite a few subject, such as maths, Chinese, English and physics. I use to play ping-pong a lot in my spare time, but now I am interesting in football. Do you play any ball games? What your favorite sport? I look forward to hear from you soon. Yours, Li Hua 第一行:将 learn 改为 learned 第二行:在 to 后加 be 第三行:my 改为 you;去掉 more 第四行:where 改为 which 第五行:subject 改为 subjects 第六行:use 改为 used;interesting 改为 interested 第七行:What 后加 is 或改为 What’s;hear 改为 hearing

(三) My favorite sport is football. I was a member of our school football team. We practice for three times every week and often watch football match on TV together. Play football not only makes us to grow up tall and strong but also give us a sense of fair play and team spirit. We must keep in mind that we play for the team instead ourselves. Also, the sport teaches us the important of obedience(服从). Each player must obey captain, who is the leader of the team. And they must not break the rules too often if we want to win the game. 第一行:was 改为 am 第二行:去掉 for;match 改为 matches 第三行:play 改为 playing;去掉 to 第四行:give 改为 gives 第五行:instead 后加 of ;important 改为 importance 第六行:captain 前加 the 第七行:they 改为 we。 (四) The Problem with Television Now I can’t watch much television. But a few years ago, I was used to watch it every night. I was often a few tired after a day’s work and watch TV demands very little effort. Unfortunate, there are too many people among my family. Some wanted to see the program while others preferred another. I am happy with any program but the others spent a lot time arguing and there was no way of settling the matter except by selling the set. Now someone at home reads instead. 第一行:much;去掉 was 第二行:few 改为 little 第三行:watch 改为 watching;unfortunate 改为 unfortunately 第四行:among 改为 in;the 改为 one 第五行:am 改为 was 第六行:a lot 后加 of 第七行:someone 改为 everyone/everybody (五) The day before the speech contest English teacher talked to me. She said that she and my schoolmate all wished me succeed, but it didn’t matter that I would win or not. When I was on the stage the next day, I felt so nervous as I shook like a leaf. There were so many people present! Suddenly, I caught a sight of my English teacher in the crowd. She was smiling but nodding at me. I remembered her words and calm down. I did a good job and won the first prize. Now my picture and the prize is hanging in the library. Whenever I see them I will often think of my English teacher. (五) NMET2000 第一行:English teacher 前加 my

第二行:schoolmate 改为 schoolmates;succeed 改为 success 第三行:that 改为 whether 第四行:as 改为 that 第五行:去掉 a 第六行:but 改为 and 第七行:calm 改为 calmed; is 改为 are 第八行:often 去掉 (六) Dear Peter, Thanks very much on inviting me to your birthday party on Sunday. I’d like very much come but I had an examination on Monday morning. It is an very important exam but I can’t afford to fail it, I’ll spend all the whole weekend reading and prepare for it. So I’m really sorry that I won’t be able to come in this time. Hope you can understand. I’ll take this chance to wish you wonderful time on your birthday. Happy birthday, Peter, and many happy return of the day! Yours, LiMing 第一行:on 改为 for 第二行:come 前面加 to ;had 改为 have 第三行:but 改为 and/so;an 改为 a 第四行:去掉 all;prepare 改为 preparing 第五行:去掉 in 第六行:you 后面加 a 第七行:return 改为 returns (七) I used to love science class—all of them— biology, chemistry, geography, physics. I think I liked those classes because I felt that it helped me understand what the world works. For example, when I was a child, the rain was a mystery. In one class, I learned it rained. I think science classes clear up mysteries. But then there is always more mysteries look into. What was my least favorite class? That was math. After learn the basics of the subject, nothing else seemed very practically to me. I never saw how I could use it on my daily life. 第一行:class 改为 classes 第二行:it 改为 they 第三行:what 改为 how ;去掉 the 第四行:it 前面加 why 第五行:is 改为 are;look 前面加 to 第六行:learn 改为 learning 第七行:practically 改为 practical;on 改为 in (八) Like most of my schoolmate, I have neither brothers nor sisters, in any other words, I am an only child. My parents love me dearly of course and will do all they can make sure

that I get a good education. They did not want me to do any work at family; they want me to devote all my time to my studies so that I’ll get good marks in all my subject. We may be one family and live under a same roof, but we do not seem to get much time to talk about together. It looks as if my parents treat me as a visitor and a guest. Do they really understand their own daughter? What things are in other homes, I wonder. 第一行:schoolmate 改为 schoolmates; any 去掉 第二行:can 后加 to 第三行:did 改为 do ;family 改为 home 第四行:subject 改为 subjects 第五行:a 改为 the 第六行:about 去掉; and 改为 or 第七行:How 改成 What (九) My brother Tom was very selfish when he was a little boy. He does not want share things with other people. For example, when he bought a chocolate cake, he put them in a secret place where I couldn’t find. Then he ate it all, by himself. He never helped other. He said he is busy. That is, a game of tennis making him very busy. He did not care if something he did made people angry. For instance, on one night, he played strong and loudly music till four o’clock in the morning. But He is difference now. He often helps grandma with housework, helps mom with cooking and helps his classmates with their lessons. 第一行:does 改为 did 第二行:want 后加 to 第三行:them 改为 it ;where 改为 which/that 或删去 where 第四行:other 改为 others;第一个 is 改为 was 第五行:making 改为 made 第五行:删去 on;loudly 改为 loud 第六行:difference 改为 different (十) What should you do when your parents become anger? If your parents got mad, try to have a conversation with them about it. Remembering not to shout at them. They usually will try to change, but they will take some time because they get angry all their life, and that is all they know. You might have to change for your method a couple of times. Do any nice things for your parents that they don’t expect ―like cooking, doing the dishes, washing clothes, or clean the floors. If this doesn’t work, bring in friend that you feel comfortable, and have him or her help you. 第一行:anger 改为 angry;got 改为 get 第二行:Remembering 改为 Remember 第三行:change 后加 it 第四行:life 改为 lives ;去掉 for 第五行:any 改为 some 第六行:clean 改为 cleaning

第七行:friend 前加 a


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