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英语六级作文预测及范文(九) Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic What does Modern Science Bring us? You should write at least 150 words, and base your composition on the outline (given in Chinese) below: 1)科学究竟带给我们什么?这个问题一直备受争议 2)很多人认为科学带来了很多问题,比如污染、核武器 3)你对此的看法是… What Does Modern Science Bring us?

_______________________________________________________________________________ 行文思路 本题属于提纲式文字命题。 提纲第 1 点提出一个有争议的话题, 提纲第 2 点针对该话题 提出一种反面观点, 提纲第 3 点要求谈谈“我”的看法, 由此可判断本文应为对比选择型作文。 根据所给提纲, 本文应包含如下内容: 指出关于科学的争议, 简单阐述科学带来的问题; 表明“我”对科学的正面看法,阐述科学带给我们的好处;得出结论:科学发展利大于弊。 高分范文 What Does Modern Science Bring us? The question “What does modern science bring us?” has always [1]provoked great debate. Some people argue that science should [2]been responsible for pollution and has brought us the nuclear bomb that threatens our existence. [3]In addition, they point out that cloning has shaken the foundation of moral codes. [3]However, [4]compared with the negative aspects, [5]I think, the blessing of science is more evident. As we see, the vast improvements made in the field of medicine have served to lengthen our life expectancy and to reduce the rate of infant morality. [3]What’s more, the discovery of mechanization, better seeds, better technique of irrigation and pest control has worked to increase the productivity levels on farms. As to transportation, the railway, modern ocean liner, jet plane, and motor vehicles have made our lives more comfortable and convenient, [6]as well as provide more chances for commercial and industrial development. [3]Besides, the invention of the computer has assisted a lot in our life and work. [3]In general, [7]the advantages of science far outweigh its disadvantages. And in most cases, [8]it is not science itself but human beings’ misuse of it that brings us undesirable results. [3]Therefore, [9]it is no doubt that we should continue developing science and [10]take full

advantage of it. 【亮点点评】 [1]“引起极大的争议”。 [2]“对…负责,是…的原因”。 [3]过渡衔接词语,使文章条理清晰、衔接紧密。 [4]“与…相比”,过去分词短语作状语。 [5]“插入语”。 [6]“也,还”,表示并列。 [7]“利大于弊”。 [8]强调句型,此处强调的是 not…but 连接的并列主语。 [9]“毫无疑问”。 [10]“充分利用”。 佳句临摹 1.佳句:Compared with the negative aspects, I think, the blessing of science is more evident. 临摹:我认为,与传统的字典相比,电子字典携带和使用起来更加方便。 ___________________________________________________________________________. 2.佳句:Motor vehicles have made our lives more comfortable and convenient, as well as provide more chances for commercial and industrial development. 临摹:了解一个人,我们可以看他交什么样的朋友,也可以看他读什么样的书。 ___________________________________________________________________________. 3.佳句:It is not science itself but human beings’ misuse of it that brings us undesirable results. 临摹:一个人的成功不是取决于他的外貌而是取决于他的能力。 ___________________________________________________________________________. 【KEY】

1. Compared with traditional dictionaries, I think, electronic dictionaries are more convenient to carry and use. 2. A man may usually be known by the books he reads as well as by the company he keeps. 3. It is not one’s appearance but his capability that decides his final success. 英语六级作文预测及范文(十) Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic Road Accidents. You should write at least 150 words, and base your composition on the outline (given in Chinese) below: 1)道路事故会给人们的生命和财产带来很大的损失 2)分析道路事故发生的主要原因 3)如何降低事故发生率 Road Accidents

_______________________________________________________________________________ 行文思路 本题属于提纲式文字命题。 提纲第 1 点提出一个问题, 提纲第 2 点要求分析造成该问题 的原因,提纲第 3 点要求说明解决该问题的方法,由此可判断本文应为问题解决型作文。 根据所给提纲,本文应包含如下内容:指出道路事故的严重性及主要危害;分析导致道 路事故的主要原因;说明应该如何降低道路事故的发生率。 高分范文 Road Accidents Road accidents, [1]as one of the important social problems, have always been paid great concern. In most of the big cities, every day, there happen quite a few road accidents. In these accidents, many people suffer great property losses [2]and some of them even lose their lives. [3]The following reasons contribute to road accidents. [4]Above all, traffic is becoming heavier and heavier, especially in big cities. More and more vehicles on road [5]increase the chances of accidents. [4]In addition, many drivers lack safety awareness and even don’t comply with the traffic regulations. For example, some drivers run the red light or drive after being drunk. [4]Besides, the [6]weak supervision and management of traffic control sectors is a noticeable reason. [7]Considering the seriousness of the traffic problem, [8]it is high time for us to take more effective measures to solve it. [4]Firstly, the government should invest more money to improve

public transportation and provide more transportation ways for people to choose. [4]Secondly, stricter laws and regulations should be made to punish those who break traffic regulations. [4]Finally, drivers should enhance safety awareness and develop good driving manners. [9]Only in this way could road accidents be avoided successfully. 【亮点点评】 [1]插入语,as 意为“作为”。 [2]表递进。 [3]用于引出原因。 [4]过渡衔接词语,使文章条理清晰、衔接紧密。 [5]“增加了…的机会或可能性”。 [6]“监管不力”,weak 的使用准确地道。 [7]“考虑到,鉴于”,介词。 [8]用于引出解决办法,表示解决问题的紧迫性,常译为“早该是…的时候了”。 [9]“only+状语”位于句首,引起句子部分倒装。 佳句临摹 1.佳句:In these accidents, many people suffer great property losses and some of them even lose their lives. 临摹:一些人失败后可能会变得灰心丧气,甚至会放弃成功的希望。 ___________________________________________________________________________. 2.佳句:More and more vehicles on road increase the chances of accidents. 临摹:许多学生认为考取更多的证书可以增加他们找工作的机会。 ___________________________________________________________________________. 3.佳句:It is high time for us to take more effective measures to solve it. 临摹:因此,我们早该关注一下人口过剩问题了。 ___________________________________________________________________________. 【KEY】

1. Some people, after a failure, may become discouraged and even give up their hope for success. 2. Many students believe that more certificates may increase the chances of their being employed. 3. Therefore, it is high time we paid special attention to the problem of overpopulation.


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