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56级二轮研讨课件(2016-04-05 10.34.29)


Beautify English Writing
No.1 Senior Middle School of Guangrao Wu Xiuqin

Leading in
1.这里的风景很漂亮。

too simple

The scenery here is very beautiful. 2.这个教授很棒。 The professor is very good. 3.这次会议很重要。 The meeting is very important.

第五档(21-25分) 最高档次的给分范围和要求 完全完成了试题规定的任务。 ?准确、清楚地表达了短文的内容,要点无遗漏 ?应用了较多的语法结构和词汇 ?语法结构和词汇有少许错误,但为尽可能使用较复杂表达方式 所致;具备较强的语言应用能力 ?有效地使用了语句间的连接成分,使全文结构紧凑.完全达到了预期的写作 目的。

1. advanced words 考 纲 解 读

2. advanced structures

3. proper connective words

书面表达最高档次的给分范围和要求

一篇文章中的闪光词 就像是浩瀚夜空中的点点繁星, 能使人眼前一亮, 使你的文章可以从堆积如山的考卷中stand out, 成就你的outstanding。

generous, humorous, 1. More specific meaning smart, gentle, warm多实少虚 : hearted, confident, (1)a good person considerate, 〔高级〕He is an amazing footballpromising…. player.

advanced words

〔高级〕This is a fantastic place, really beautiful. 〔高级〕The view from my bedroom window was absolutely breathtaking. 〔高级〕This is a unique opportunity to learn about American culture 〔高级〕The school's examination results were very impressive. 〔高级〕The food was superb/awesome and we had a wonderful night 〔高级〕The staff are doing a splendid /fabulousjob. 〔高级〕I can't stand him, but my wife thinks he’s marvelous. 〔高级〕You look absolutely gorgeous in that dress!

advanced words
2. phrases preferred
短语优先:

〔高级〕Education is of much/vital/great importance. 〔高级〕A balanced diet is absolutely essential for everyone. 〔高级〕First impressions really do count. 〔高级〕Parents play an important role/part in children’s learning. 〔高级〕Chinese parents attach much importance to children’s education. 〔高级〕It is very vital/essential for parents to be honest with their children.

advanced words
3.refreshment needed不落俗套,给点新鲜感
I don’t want to live with a stranger in a hotel room.

I don’t want to share a hotel room with a stranger.
She shouted loudly , “I’ve succeeded!”

She shouted at the top of her voice, “I’ve made it!”

1.I used to like reading and writing poems at middle school. I used to take delight in/ be fond of/ be keen on reading and writing poems at middle school. 2.As a result ,the plan was a failure. The plan turned out to be a failure.

3.You can find my house easily. You have no trouble/difficulty in finding my
house ./ You can find my house without any difficulty .

4. Suddenly I thought of a good idea. All of a sudden, a good idea occurred to me. 5.There are two functional areas in the Students’ Healthy Growth Center. The Students’ Healthy Growth Center consists of two functional areas./ The Students’ Healthy Growth Center is made up of two functional areas.

(1)We can imagine the beautiful surroundings. (2)There are many trees along the streets. (3)There is a clean river in the city. (4) There are many fishes in the river. (5)There are willow trees on the one side. (6)There are some pieces of grassland on the other side. (7)There are many flowers on them. 下面是修改后的段落: (1)Just imagine the beautiful surroundings if we make our cities green (2)Green trees line the streets. (3)A clean river winds through the city,in which a lot of fishes aboun (4)On the one side stand rows of willow trees. (5)On the other side lies a stretch of grassland sprinkled with many yellow and red flowers. 有长句(1)、(3)、(5),也有短句(2)和(4), 一长一短,抑扬顿挫的节奏感就出来了。 而且句型结构变化也很大,使文章流畅自然,生动活泼。

书面表达最高档次的给分范围和要求

短句:节奏明快,生动活泼 长句:可以装载复杂的思想, 使语言富有节奏感,让句式多样化:长短句结合

long and short sentences alternately

composite sentence复合句 sentence of special kind特殊句式

各 种 从 句



倒 装




with 复 合 宾 语

独 立 主 格

强 调 句 型






short sentences

1.As he was tired and hungry, the boy was unwilling to move on .(用单词简化句子)
2.If you study hard, you will make rapid progress. (用并列句) .

Tired and hungry ,the boy was unwilling to move on . Study hard and you’ll make rapid progress. On his arriving, please give me an e-mail.

3. When he arrives, please give me an e-mail.(用介词结构)

4. With your help, I won the competition.( 用but for简化句子) I couldn’t have won the competition but for your help. 5.Meimei, who is seven years old, has been learning to ride a bicycle for several days.(用同位语简化)

Meimei, a girl of seven years old has been learning to ride a bicycle for several days.

composite sentence&sentence of special kind 1. She walked out of the lab and many students followed her. (过去分词)
2. They sang and laughed as they went back to school.(现在分 词) 3.I won’t believe what he says. (让步状语从句) 4.What is reflected in the story rather than the story itself counts.(强调句) 5. I won the competition because of her help.(用虚拟语气)

composite sentence&sentence of special kind

6.He speaks more and he felt more excited.(the more…the more) 7.The weather is fine and a large number of people went to climb the Western Hills.(独立主格) 8.We are expected to speak English as frequently as possible.We find it is very important.(it作形式 宾语) 9.In the picture we can see a boy in worn clothes, sitting at a shabby wooden table and a pile of books were on the desk.(with的复合结构) 10. A tall tree with a history of 1,000 years stand just in front of the house .(倒装句)

composite sentence&sentence of special kind

1. She walked out of the lab and many students followed her. (过去分 词)

Followed by many students, she walked out of the lab.

composite sentence&sentence of special kind

2.They sang and laughed as they went back to school.(V-ing形式)

Singing and laughing, they went back to school.

composite sentence&sentence of special kind

3.I won’t believe what he says. (让步状语从句)

No matter what he says, I won’t believe.

composite sentence&sentence of special kind

4.What is reflected in the story rather than the story itself counts. (强调句)

It’s what is reflected in the story rather than the story itself that counts./ It’s not the story itself but what is reflected in the story that counts.

composite sentence&sentence of special kind

5. I won the competition because of her help.(用虚拟语气) I couldn’t have won the competition but for your help.

composite sentence&sentence of special kind

6.He speaks more and he felt more excited.(the more…the more)
The more he spoke, the more excited he felt.

composite sentence&sentence of special kind

7.The weather is fine and a large number of people went to climb the Western Hills. (独立主格)

The weather being fine, a large number of people went …

composite sentence&sentence of special kind

8.We are expected to speak English as frequently as possible We find it is very important.(it作形式宾语)

We find it important to speak English as frequently as possible.

composite sentence&sentence of special kind

9.In the picture we can see a boy in worn clothes, sitting at a shabby wooden table and a pile of books were on the desk (with的复合结构) In the picture we can see a boy in worn clothes, sitting at a shabby wooden table with a pile of books on the desk.

composite sentence&sentence of special kind

10. A tall tree with a history of 1,000 years just stand in front of the house .(倒装句)

Just in front of the house stand a tall tree with a history of 1,000 years.

The badof habit First all of being wasteful will have a bad In financial addition, effect on their own character. It adds Firstly, burden to their parents. The world’sBesides, limited natural To begin with, Moreover, resources will be used up. What’s more In the first place, the bad habit of being wasteful will have a bad effect on their own character. Secondly, it adds financial burden to their parents. Last but not least, the world’s limited natural resources, such as water and electricity , will be used up soon. Finally, What’s worse,

书面表达最高档次的给分范围和要求

一篇好的书面表达,应该行文连贯流畅,具有 “逻辑美”。使用恰当连接词,能使文章上下衔 接自然、紧凑,使文章更为地道,更具“英语 味”,档次也就更高了。

Connective words 逻辑角度 ⑴排序关系 合适的过渡性词汇
first of all; in the first place; above all, to begin with ; furthermore; last but not least ; and; too; as well as; along with; together with for example; for instance; like; such as; as to; take …as an example but; however; while; though; otherwise; on the contrary; contrary to…;despite; in spite of because; since; thanks to; as a result /consequence (of); thus; therefore in a word; in short; in brief; to sum up; in conclusion; on the whole; in general what’s more; besides; to make matters worse; what’s worse; worse still; furthermore

⑵并列关系
⑶举例关系 ⑷转折关系

⑸因果关系
⑹归纳总结 ⑺递进关系

Good afternoon, everyone! The topic of my speech today is “My Attitude to Pursuit of Fashion in School”. Now in our school there is a hot pursuit of fashion. Some students live a very expensive life … E _______. _______, they hope to look smart and special. B _______, they want to win others’ admiration and respect. F In addition, it makes them feel cool . A _______, we students should hold the right sense of D values. We should practise thrift (节俭)in our daily life . _____ , it is advisable for us to donate some pocket money to the Hope Project so that those poor children in rural areas can C it is the inner beauty rather than return to school.______, our appearance that makes us respectable. Thank you for listening!
A.As far as I am concerned B.The reasons why they do so are as follows C. Last but not least D. What’s more E. Firstly F. Secondly

Step3:Discusion and appreciation
Creating a Harmonious Environment Nowadays, as many students live in the school dormitories, it is hard to avoid quarrels. Last Tuesday Zhang Fang stayed up doing his homework after 10:30 pm in the dormitory. Feeling tired, Li Hua went to bed immediately. But he couldn’t fall asleep with lights on. He got so angry that he lost his temper, complaining about Zhang’s selfishness. Neither of them would give in and the quarrel continued. While they were quarreling, I tried to calm them down, saying all of us should care about others. They realized their faults and made up finally. After all, we share the same school and everyone is part of the big family. Whenever we face any problem, we should learn to understand and communicate with each other. Only when we think more for others can we create a harmonious environment.

(2015全国卷1)假定你是李华,你校英文报“外国文化”栏目

拟刊登美国节日风俗和中学生生活的短文。请给美国 朋友彼得写信约稿,要点如下: 1. 栏目介绍; 2. 稿件内容; 3. 稿件长度:约 400 词; 4. 交稿日期:6 月 28 日前。 注意:1. 词数 100 左右;2. 可以适当增加细节, 以使行文连贯;3. 开头语已为你写好。 Dear Peter, I’d like to ask you to write an article for our school’s English newspaper.

愿同学们像这匹骏马, 创造自己的辉煌!

Thank you , good bye 驰骋在高考的征程中,

Tips in your daily English learning:

1.Collect good words/phrases/sentences;
2.Read more;

3.Practice makes perfect;
4.Be confident anytime.


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