教 材：牛津高中英语(模块一)高一 文档内容：教学设计—教案 单 元：Unit 2 板 块：Task 作 者：李江红
写作“三步走”： 自我介绍，说明写信目的→提出建议以及改进措施，忠告→表达希望采纳建议，或者 期盼回复。 注意： 语言要委婉、礼貌，顾及对方感受。在提出缺点之前，最好先肯定其优点。 范文解析： Directions: Your friend Lucy asked you for some information about successful interview. Write a letter of no less than 100 words to give her some advice. Do not sign your own name at the end of the letter. Use “Wang Hua” instead. Do not write the address. Dear Lucy, You asked me for some advice on how to prepare for a successful interview and I will try to offer some useful suggestions. First of all, find out all the information you can about the company before you go to the interview. Secondly, practice your answers to common questions and make a list of questions to ask, too. It will make you feel more confident and relaxed. Thirdly, try to make the best impression: dress appropriately, sell your strengths, arrive early, be enthusiastic, shake hands firmly, be an active listener, sit up straight and maintain eye contact. Finally, do not forget to say “thank you ” after the interview. I hope you will find these suggestions helpful. Good Luck! Sincerely yours, Wang Hua
◆常用句式： 1、 You have asked me for some advice on/with regard to…and I will try to give some useful suggestions. 您问及我有关……的事情，我会尽量给出一些有用的建议。 2、As a staff member of Sales Department/regular customer/student of Management School, I am writing to you to present my suggestions on… 作为销售部的职员/老主顾/管理学院的学生，我写信向您建议…… 3、I would like to suggest that… 我建议…… 4、If I were you, I would… 如果我是您，我会…… 5、I think it would be more beneficial if you could… 我认为您可以 6、I think it would be more beneficial if you could… 我想如果您能……，可能会更好。 7、I believe you will take seriously my advice into account. 我想您会认真考虑我的建议的。 8、I hope you will find these proposals/suggestions/recommendations practical/useful/helpful. 我希望这些建议/意见对您有用。 9、I will be more than happy to see improvements in this regard. 如果这方面有所改善我会非常开心的。 10、 I hope that my suggestions are helpful for your decision-making. 希望我的建议能对您的决定有所帮助。
Format of an advice letter
1. To whom 2. From whom Dear Mr. Liu, _______________________________________ _______________________________________ _______________________________________ Yours sincerely/truly, Mr. Zhu 3. Opening sentences 1) I am very glad to hear from you. 2) Thank you for your letter. 3) You have asked me for my advice with regard to…and I will try to make some suggestions. 4) I am writing in reply to… 4. Closing sentences 1) I hope you will find my suggestions/recommendations/advice helpful/practical/ useful. 2) At last, I hope I will be your best friend’s forever! Good luck to you! 3) Let’s keep in touch. I do hope to hear good news from you. 5. Body (giving advice) We can use some conjunctions and phrases to make our composition better. 平行: as well as; not only…but also; 转折: however; nevertheless; in spite of; otherwise 因果: therefore; as a result; owing to; 递进: besides; what’s more; furthermore; in addition; what’s worse 对比: on the contrary; instead of; on the other hand; unlike Write a letter in class Write an advice letter in class. Ask one student to come to the blackboard and write it. After about 12 minutes, correct the composition together. A sample writing of the advice letter Dear Mr. Liu, I am very sorry to hear that. Here I want to give you some advice, I wish it could be helpful for you. Firstly, you should be not only strict but also kindly to him. Treat him as an adult. You mustn't always shout at him. Respect him and his advice. Maybe his advice is of value. Secondly, you may try to enjoy what he likes, such as music and DVDs. Take more notice of what he thinks. On one hand, you can understand him further, on the
other hand you can bridge the gap between you. Thirdly, you can turn to your son's close friends for help. They can understand what your son thinks and needs better. I believe you can solve the problem satisfactorily, and everything will go well. Good luck to you! Yours truly Mr. Zhu Homework 1. Review the skills of how to write an advice letter. 2. Write an advice letter to Liu Wei.
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