Section Ⅶ Writing——如何写音乐会评论
[写作技法指导] [文体指导] 每当我们读完一本书、看完一场电影或听完一场音乐会，我们或多或少都会有一些感想，如果我们把这些感想 写出来那就成了评论。 音乐会评论可以分成三部分来写： 1．音乐会的开始 介绍举办音乐会的时间、地点、演出的歌手/乐团、音乐会的开场状况、观众的情况等。 2．音乐会的过程 描述音乐会中节目的具体内容、表演的场景、自己的反应以及其他观众的反应等。 3．音乐会的结束 描述音乐会结束时的情景，如歌手为歌迷签名、合影留念。 [亮点句式] 1．On the evening of last Sunday，I watched the concert given by Wang Leehom. 上星期天晚上，我看了王力宏举办的音乐会。 2．During the 3?hour concert，he sang a lot of songs. 三个小时的音乐会期间，他唱了很多歌曲。 3．It shows that he/she has a great talent for music. 他/她表现出很强的音乐天赋。 4．The audience enjoyed his/her performance very much. 观众非常喜欢他/她的表演。 5．Everyone felt excited at the performance. 大家对表演感到很兴奋。 6．The atmosphere during the concert was extremely exciting. 音乐会期间的氛围令人相当振奋。 7．His performance is very popular with the audience. 他的演出很受观众的欢迎。 8．I hope I will watch his performance again in the future. 我希望在不久的将来能再看到他的表演。
[满分佳作构建] [文体指导] 请根据以下内容写一篇音乐会评论： 1．去年，中国著名歌手周杰伦在上海举办了演唱会。我很幸运买到了一张票。他的歌曲很受年轻人的欢迎。 2．虽然天气很热，观众还是很开心。 3．周杰伦是中国最知名歌手之一，出了很多唱片。他在全国各地巡回演唱过。我们经常在电视上和收音机上
参考词汇：周杰伦 Jay Chou；《青花瓷》 Green Flower Porcelain；《七里香》 Seven Feets Soundly
1．词数 100 个左右；
3．look forward to
4．be popular among
5．have a very good time
6．be deeply impressed by
Jay Chou gave his singing performance in Shanghai last year.
His songs are very popular among young people.
Jay Chou is one of the most famous Chinese singers．
Jay Chou has made many records．
He has given performances throughout China．
We often hear his songs broadcast both on TV and on the radio.
He sang many well?known songs such as Green Flower Porcelain and Seven Feets Soundly. 8．这些歌优美自然。 These songs were beautiful and natural． (二) 句式升级 9．把句 1 和句 2 合并成定语从句的复合句 Jay Chou，whose songs are very popular among young people，gave his singing performance in Shanghai last year. 10．把句 3 和句 4 合并成一个含同位语的简单句 Jay Chou，one of the most famous Chinese singers，has made many records. 11．用 not only...but also...合并句 5 和句 6 Not only has he given performances throughout China but also we often hear his songs broadcast both on TV and on the radio. 12．把句 7 和句 8 合并成含定语从句的复合句 He sang many well?known songs such as Green Flower Porcelain and Seven Feets Soundly, all of which were beautiful and natural. [妙笔成篇]
【参考范文】 Jay Chou，whose songs are very popular among young people，gave his singing performance in Shanghai last year.I was lucky enough to get a ticket.It was very hot in the summer time，but we had a very good time. Jay Chou，one of the most famous Chinese singers，has made many records.Not only has he given performances throughout China but also we often hear his songs broadcast both on TV and on the radio. He sang many well?known songs such as Green Flower Porcelain and Seven Feets Soundly，all of which were beautiful and natural.I was deeply impressed by his singing and am looking forward to hearing him sing again.
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